Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and suppo

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Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

“What is success”? The research has shown that success means different thing to different person such as to some it may mean getting at the top of organization while for some it may mean spiritual upliftment. Therefore, any institution, be it educational, cannot inculcate the fixed definition of success in mind. The prompt states that educational institutions have an onus to urge students to pursue in which they are likely to achieve success. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with the prompt and would argue that institutions should left the option to choose field of study as per their preferences. The reasons for my stand are mentioned in the subsequent paragraphs.

First of all, does success mean excellence? As per research findings, excellence is personal, moral, spiritual and intellectual upliftment which is at pinnacle of one’s career, success is only a meagre and sometimes insufficient component. For instance, an engineer who has performed well in his academics because of parental or societal pressure to earn a reputed degree but have penchant for wild life photography and covertly pursue it, it may happen that this person may not well perform in his education skills beyond a college and may even flounder at trifling problems. Further, a passionate artist, if forced to choose study mathematics or finance because of more lucrative career options, he may pursue these career options but every moment of his life, he would regret not pursuing his field for arts. This mournful behaviour definitely would affect his performance at work and he would be chastised more often than not. Therefore, the institutions must not encourage students to choose fields because of its reputation. It matters because institutions were developed to nurture the inherent talent and not forcing their will on students.

Secondly, does success continue forever? As per research, what successful is today, may be antiquated or vulnerable tomorrow. For instance, during the period after 1st world war, there was a push from national authorities to imbibe the nuclear engineering among students in order to develop nuclear weapons. It was highly remunerated career then. But as time passed by, peace process started, this career option started to fade away. Further, during late 90s, there was push from industry to educate students in the field of marketing research involving market surveys and field studies. Many business schools were in news for their placement records with highest ever salaries for their students were offered by companies. However, with the advent of data science and automated research, the necessity of field surveys diminished because companies started to hire people experts in reading data on social networking websites to ascertain consumer behaviour. Therefore, the educational institutions cannot persuade students to choose successful fields which may be transient. It matters because in this fast moving and well integrated countries, no career option is sustainable for long time.

Thirdly, does success leads to self-satisfaction? It may not so. For instance, the famous mathematician, Mr. Ramanujan were poor in his marks in all subjects except mathematics. And at that time it was not prudent to pursue mathematics since India was under colonial rule and therefore, no opportunity used to exist for such pure science field. His school advised and hound him to choose something else so that he could help his family to make the ends since he was from penurious background. But undeterred by these tribulations, he pursued mathematics and was offered a bachelor degree by the college in UK and for his subsequent research in mathematics he was conferred the doctorate. He became a paragon for other Indians who despite not having any formal education beyond school has made his name in the world. Had he pursued what his school advised, he would have not discovered theorems which are being used today to solve many complex problems. It is appreciable since educational institutions do not know what their students like to pursue and they do not accept the findings that passion for a field attracts the success to a man automatically.

Of course some would argue that educational entity, being the incharge of developing the next generation of knowledge must advise their students to choose career leading up to success, however, they negate the relationship between the interest of a student and an impact he can have for his inclined field of study. Many examples prove that disregarding the advice from a school and pursuing own passion actually defines success such as Mahalanobsis (the great statistician), Bill gates (founder of Microsoft), Steve Jobs (founder of Apple Inc.) and Indra Nooyi (former CEO of Pepsi Inc.). In conclusion, these institutes must realise that they are there to enhance the inherent talents and skills of students being in harmony with propriety, but not for discouraging the students to choose a field which is not popular considered its success probabilities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 576, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...utions should left the option to choose field of study as per their preferences. The ...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to study'
Suggestion: to study
... passionate artist, if forced to choose study mathematics or finance because of more ...
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Line 5, column 652, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...ere in news for their placement records with highest ever salaries for their students were o...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lead'?
Suggestion: lead
...for long time. Thirdly, does success leads to self-satisfaction? It may not so. Fo...
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Line 9, column 580, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
... and Indra Nooyi former CEO of Pepsi Inc.. In conclusion, these institutes must re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, first of all, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 58.6224719101 174% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4251.0 2235.4752809 190% => OK
No of words: 804.0 442.535393258 182% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28731343284 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.32493133829 4.55969084622 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88299416279 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 396.0 215.323595506 184% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492537313433 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 1311.3 704.065955056 186% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.9915860847 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172119836407 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462151847373 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597032512124 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118264438409 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253607400185 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 215.0 100.480337079 214% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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