Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supp

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Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

Surely, educational institutions are the best platform for the student’s to develop their personality, moral standards and skill-sets, so that they can contribute to the society as well as nation. Also, it is the responsibilities of the educational institutions to encourage every student’s and guide their students to enhance in their better future, but that doesn’t mean that only responsibility to encourage for lucrative careers. Hence, I completely disagree with the proposition that the student’s should be motivated to choose the fields that will prepare them for their lucrative careers. A contrary position would reflect too narrow objectives of educational institutions.

The primary reason why I agree with this claim is that resulting and enhancing the lucrative careers vastly depends on the student’s rather than university. It is obvious that vast majority of the students would like to follow the subject of their interest, delve into the various facets of that subject and contribute with the knowledge of that field for society and nation. Although some of the individuals are interested in the fields—as science, engineering, medicine, and other technical field’s—that are considered to be lucrative career’s, there are majority of the students who engage themselves in area’s—as agriculture, domestic business, food-stalls—and thrived in their respective professional career. To exemplify the position, I would like to take the example of a student, who has recently completed Bachelors in Agriculture and started local organic farming in his village. Introducing new technology and pragmatic approach in farming, he has astounded everyone with his skills and knowledge on scientific farming method; also, he has been earning good sum of money (profit) with his local business as compared to students with, so considered lucrative careers on engineering, medicine etcetera. Undoubtedly, the above cited example would concur that lucrative careers depend on how someone is interested in the particular field and how someone carry forward that field.

Furthermore, lucrative careers is dependent upon various factor’s such as contemporary period, change in government policies, competency in the respective field, and may be less benign after the above mentioned factor’s result to not to favor the situation. For instance, gaming is not considered as lucrative careers ten years before now, and educational institution also does not encourage students to pursue their career on the gaming technology. However, who could have thought the technology and availability of the internet would introduce gaming as the lucrative career. Nowadays, one of the major sources of entertainment is gaming and lots of people are developing games for smartphones and personal computer’s, and consequently earn lots of money too. To add, let us further take the example of nursing field in the context of Nepal. Nursing, considered as a lucrative field in one time, is now in miserable condition, as level of competency have been increased in that with limited availability for the employment. Hence, there are various factor’s affecting the lucrative careers.

On the flip side, some people might argue that encouragement by the teacher’s would play a vital role in pursuing their careers; but, it’s a career not a lucrative career. Rather than keeping the narrow mind-set on the encouraging students focusing on subject educational institution want’s to succeed, it would be practical to encourage student’s work hard and infuse strong determination on the particular subject of interest, which is most likely to make the students successful in any field.

In the conclusion, it is plausible to concede that, despite focusing narrowly only to encourage students to follow lucrative careers, it will be practical motivate students to focus on their subject of their interest: students focus and determination will enhance their lucrative careers. Also, there are some factors before considering one field as lucrative career.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... field for society and nation. Although some of the individuals are interested in the field...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
...o be lucrative career's, there are majority of the students who engage themselves i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3514.0 2235.4752809 157% => OK
No of words: 615.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71382113821 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29887964525 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469918699187 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 1110.6 704.065955056 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9244162465 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.333333333 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2857142857 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289498638541 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986581449777 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804787424132 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192632379047 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797031925086 0.0667264976115 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 48.8420337079 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 12.1743820225 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.43 12.1639044944 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 161.0 100.480337079 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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