Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Human is a social animal. Every person needs to live in a society to thrive and grow to his full potential. When many people live in a society, some laws are needed to be issed to keep the society prospering and ordered. But, it isn’t to say that all laws works toward the prosperity of the society. The just laws are necessary for the improvement of society. But the laws which are unjust can do more harm to the society than good. As we humans are living in the society, it is our responsibility to guide to society to prosperity and and improve the lives of all the human beings around us. To perform this duty, the people in a society is responsible for obeying the just laws and disobey and resist unjust laws.
Just laws are those laws which contributes to the prosperity of the society. If a law ensures the improvements of life of the people in a society, we can call it a just law. There are laws against crimes like murders, thefts etc. Using these laws, the criminal committing these crimes are punished. In this way, these laws inhibits our digression into chaos. The law allowing women to vote has greatly influenced the Democracy. Again, the laws regarding racism, sexism etc. are very much needed to eradicate these problems from the society.
On the other hand, the unjust laws are those laws which are issued to oppress others. These laws are detrimental to the development of a nation and society. These kind of laws can be seen in a dictatorial regime, where the dictator issue laws which serves only to his purpose even if it harms the overall welfare of the nation. Also, some traditional laws can also be coutned as unjust. Once, there were slavery issued by laws in many parts of the world. To this day, in middle east, women are living subhuman life for the prevalent laws against them. As a responsible citizen of the society, it is our duty to resist against thse unjust laws.
There might be an argument that, though the disenfranchisement, sexism, slavery etc. unjust laws in the past was commensurette to the then society. But, it is no proof that the people in the then society was all living to their full potential. The point that there was once a wrong doesn’t signify that, there is no option to right that wrong. So, these unjust laws must be resisted and eradicated. And it can be done only if the responsible citizens of the society raise their voiced against these laws.
Humans are the best creation of all the beings in the world. To uphold that honor of humankind, every individual should come forward to follow the just laws and resist and vanquish the unjust laws.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 538, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: and
...ility to guide to society to prosperity and and improve the lives of all the human bein...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...he development of a nation and society. These kind of laws can be seen in a dictatorial re...
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Line 5, column 388, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nal laws can also be coutned as unjust. Once, there were slavery issued by laws in m...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unjust
...isenfranchisement, sexism, slavery etc. unjust laws in the past was commensurette to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2165.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 467.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63597430407 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49209324246 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436830835118 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.2370786517 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3702006706 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8387096774 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 15.064516129 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 18.0 5.13820224719 350% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262234304857 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788274330125 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673679824648 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167764412847 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403857787491 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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