Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In recent times, technological advancements has come to assist the humankind in ways not conceivable in past. The speed of these advancements are astonishing. These technologies are simplifiying our lives in many fronts.
The effect of the technologies in our lives are innumerable. It has lessen the hard physical labor of humans. We can now use industrial robots or automatic machines to perform the arduous physical tasks that once humans had to do. The use of various machineries has, in one hand, increased speed, efficiency, on the other hand, decreased the physical labor needed to perform them in past, thus comforting us. As these products are also produced in high volume, the price and availability of these products have also been decreased. This contribution has made our lives simpler.
Not only in the field of physical labors, technologies have come to aid in our everyday lives also. Take smart home for example. It takes care of all the mundane tasks automatically for our homes, thus making our lives simple and give more leisure times to us. We can use the extra times for more higher activites or just have some leisure.
Technology also plays an important role to the current idea of globalization too. Using internet, telephone, cellular phone etc. the world has become smaller. We can now connect with people all around the world with just a click of the mouse. International businesses have only been possible for technogies.
It is not to say that technologies making our lives simple doesn't require some efforts from us. To use that technology, we need to learn how to use them. Only after that, technologies can make our lives better and simpler. So, there is a need for learning the technology usages. People who have a stagnant mindset and doesn't want to learn about technologies may have hard time adapting to this new world that is buzzing with various wonders of technolgies.
Technologies makes our lives easier and simple in many ways. It's time to stop our fear towards adopting technologies in our lives and let it put to use for the betterment of our lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...t the humankind in ways not conceivable in past. The speed of these advancements are as...
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Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'lessened'.
Suggestion: lessened
...es in our lives are innumerable. It has lessen the hard physical labor of humans. We c...
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Line 3, column 381, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...e physical labor needed to perform them in past, thus comforting us. As these products ...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... have come to aid in our everyday lives also. Take smart home for example. It takes ...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
...s to us. We can use the extra times for more higher activites or just have some leisure. ...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...at technologies making our lives simple doesnt require some efforts from us. To use th...
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Line 9, column 319, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... People who have a stagnant mindset and doesnt want to learn about technologies may ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 354.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96610169492 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78450842778 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522598870056 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1746188532 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.32 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.16 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173207640744 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576968195583 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585955303081 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106028525276 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633672993579 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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