Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Lydia Maria Child says, “Law is not law, if it violates the principles of eternal justice”. Laws are just and crystal clear. A law is made with different needs and values of society and culture. So, no law is unjust when it is made by law makers of a country. It is true that every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and resist unjust laws.
Furthermore, law is important because it acts as a guideline as to what is accepted in a society. For example, the Govt. of India has recently changed the fine, that is 23k, for not following traffic rules. Some people may agree with the changed law because they think people will start following rules due to heavy fine charges. However, others may find it unjustified because govt has not installed or placed camera on each road and every traffic signals. So, government will not get an accurate data to know how many rule breakers are there. Roads are not properly maintained by the govt. as a result accidents happen every day so who is responsible for all this.
Moreover, a law become unjust for a society when something wrong happens. If I take an example of Section 377 which was introduced in India a long time ago. According to this law, if a person is homosexual and is involved in some sexual activities, he or she is committing a crime. Although, Homosexuality is not a crime or an illegal act for a gay or a lesbian that makes Section 377 unjust for LGBT community but it just for other people of societies. So, the Indian government ended this law in 2018.
In my opinion, though the laws are just but with time and needs of society, laws should change. Changes in laws should be brought to the notice of government because with time and situation, laws become redundant.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a society when something wrong happens. If I take an example of Section 377 which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, as to, for example, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6214511041 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63435461914 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0522467183 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.25 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209115997907 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696430326821 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890851528151 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132598586646 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728220144598 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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