Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that
the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to
make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your
own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing
and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
“Time isn’t the main thing. It’s the only thing”, said by Miles Davis. Corporations have always a goal to achieve while facing challenges, operating within the law and moving forward with the time. The responsibility comes along with the operation of corporations.
Indeed, corporations have a responsibility to promote well-being of the society and the environment because they work for people. Products or services provided by these corporations are consumed by the society. If we take an example of Hindustan Unilever Limited (HUL) industry which produces fast-moving consumer goods, this industry uses various chemicals while producing consumer goods and release harmful chemicals as a wastage. They test their some of cosmetic-products on animals which shouldn’t have been done. So, It is their responsibility not to dump wastage in the environment and they should produce cruelty-free and environment-friendly products.
However, it is a competitive area where survival is at stake if a company is not making any profit while operating within the law. A company has to think about its growth meanwhile producing consumer goods. With changing time and needs of the market, a company has to increase its stocks to improve its valuation in the financial market. The reason is consumer-market tendency that is people like to purchase goods of those companies with high values because they kind of build trust on their products. Hence, corporations have the responsibility of making more money also.
In my opinion, sustainable development is important because time, money and products are important for corporations. A corporation should produce eco-friendly products keeping in mind the changing needs of society. It also makes growth of company and eventually make them earn a huge profits.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 569, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...the responsibility of making more money also. In my opinion, sustainable develo...
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Line 13, column 285, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'profit'?
Suggestion: profit
...ny and eventually make them earn a huge profits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, while, as to, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59352517986 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29118606257 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593525179856 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0314451965 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4705882353 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243172995626 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792557007252 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782928795784 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129821130555 0.150359130593 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076026600631 0.0667264976115 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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