The general welfare of a nation's people is a better indication of that nation's greatness than are the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Achievemnts of scientist, rulers and artists have direct impact on the well-being of the common people and therefore, the greatness of nation is reflected by the achievements of its scientist, rulers and artist.
Rulers personal achievements has direct impact on the well-being of the common people. The rulers which work hard to devise machination that reduce corruption and makes basic needs of people like education, healthcare and food readily accessible contributes to bettering the lives of common people. For instance, A leader may amend new scemes like free education for all, access to medical healthcare at the cheapest price. If the rulers amend new decrees that makes it almost impossible to commit corruption, large amount of public fund can be saved and channeled to the resolve the more pressing matters. It is the rulers that have most power to bring the reforms that will improve the lives of commone people. Hence, great rulers build a great nation.
Most scientist study the problems which are germane to the well-being of people. If the nation is primarily dependent on the agriculture, for instance, majority of scientist work toward making new varieties of crops that will give high yield and drought and disease resistant. It is through innovation that major problems in human history have been eradicated. Before innovating new methods of crop production, crop yield was pretty low for reason such as succesptibilty of plant to disease or unfavourable growth condition. Advent of genetic engineering made it possible to generate new varieties of plants that are resistant to diseases and can withstand harsh environment. For example, Bt cotton is transgenic cotton which produces a toxin lethal to the insects feeding on the plant.
However, in some nation there is large disparity between the achievement of its ruler, scientist and artist and the well being of the people.
In counclusion, the achievement of rulers and scientist represent the greatness of nation because their action directly contributes to the bettering of lives of commone people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28700906344 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80813069094 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528700906344 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8428515679 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0666666667 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119014502953 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483895491782 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495822201116 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893951824552 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265531235786 0.0667264976115 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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