government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Arts holds a unique cultural and traditional significance. Arts have origination dating back to prehistoric times, with caves painting. Arts or artforms include performance or theatre arts, dance styles, or painting. Arts hold important aspects of culture. It is necessary to preserve it from western influence. The author here has presented views regarding government funding of arts to ensure it flourishes freely. While government intervention is necessary to preserve artforms, extreme intervention can lead to a threat to the integrity of the arts and free speech. A deeper introspection is required in this topic to come to any conclusion.
Arts have been passed from one generation to generation in oral or written form. They hold information regarding the lifestyle and culture of early man. Funding from the government is necessary to safeguard these artforms. Arts have a major role to play in any culture, hence to preserve any nation's heritage it is necessary to keep these artforms untouched. The true aspect of these art forms has survived only in villages and towns. Due to globalization, the major cities have a western culture influenced lifestyle. Take, for example, the case of theatres. Theatre has been passed down generations with stories and anecdotes, but the technology has put these theatres out of business. People rarely visit theatres anymore. In such cases, the government needs to intervene and encourage people to follow the arts close to our heritage. To prevent these artforms from disappearing from towns and villages, the government needs to set up art galleries and museums and encourage performing art shows.
It is true that the arts need government support to survive, but increased intervention can threaten the integrity of the arts. A controlled state of arts can lead to a threat to free speech. Artists due to the constant vigilance of the government won't are able to express freely, thus restricting the flow of art. It is necessary to let the art forms flourish freely, but constant intervention from the government can be a hurdle.
It can also be the case that the government favors a particular artform resulting in suppression of the other. This will cause an immediate threat to other cultures. It is possible that the elected government can use these artforms to sell their political propaganda thus creating a biased voter base. A neutral, unbiased, and free artform can only flourish if there is a check on government intervention.
It is necessary that the government funds these arts to ensure they can flourish and are available to all people but increased intervention can threaten the integrity and lead to a more controlled society. Art cannot be expressed in fear of vigilance, it needs to let free to flourish.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...prehistoric times, with caves painting. Arts or artforms include performance or thea...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...heatre arts, dance styles, or painting. Arts hold important aspects of culture. It i...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...y in any culture, hence to preserve any nations heritage it is necessary to keep these ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, regarding, so, thus, while, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2335.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17738359202 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94476797865 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467849223947 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5165794011 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5172413793 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5517241379 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.51724137931 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165079130973 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506681890374 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389563971312 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106817856745 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04129710477 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.