Governments bare justified in circumventing the civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security

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Governments bare justified in circumventing the civil laws when doing so is vital to the protection of national security.

This topic raises a controversial issue about government being justified in restricting civil laws if doing so is important to national security. Indisputably, restricting civil laws never sits well with the citizens of a nation. Nevertheless, if restricting such laws will help keep the whole nation safe, then it's a worthy cause. Thus, I generally agree that Government are justified in doing this.

First of all, In a case of a global and regional pandemic the government would do well to restrict movement of citizens in order to save as many people as possible. I would like to point out that occurrence of such pandemic can wipe out a country if proper care is not taken. To illustrate, let us look at the case of Corona virus. In this circumstance,obviously the best step to take to reduce the stop if the virus is to limit movement of people and to ensure people stay at home till a tangible remedy is found. Consequently, it's pretty obvious that yelling people to stay at home in this case is to enhance national security and so it's justified.

Furthermore, circumventing civil law will be justified in the case of terrorism. Specifically, terrorism constitute a threat to national security. Anyone who or group involved in such act should be arrested for it. This means restricting such people from harmin other citizens of the nation. Hence,all evidence above tells us that when government does this it's justifiable .

Admittedly, government circumventing the civil laws can be somewhat unfavourable to the citizens especially when it comes to restricting the movement of a while nation, enforcing the use of nose masks as in the case of Corona virus. However, the above argument does not constitute a sufficient reason for the following government to put the lives of millions of citizens at risk in order to please them.

In conclusion, although circumventing the law comes with its fair share of discomforts, it's not enough reason to hinder circumventing the civil laws when national security is involved. As long as the government makes it clear why the laws has to be circumvented, and it's for the safety of many It will forever remain justified. In fact, stringent measures should be taken against anyone who goes again such restricted laws.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, while, as to, in conclusion, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 378.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00529100529 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05967365661 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494708994709 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3910844624 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5789473684 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8947368421 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31599183602 0.243740707755 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104519805721 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968627141659 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196126678909 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799381340254 0.0667264976115 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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