Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and suppor

Essay topics:

Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

The tourism of the country depends on the culture and arts of the country whereas protection is solely dependent on the military. The prompt states that government should invest money in arts in the same amount as of military. In my opinion, I agree with the suggestion and argue that both military and arts are useful for the country either in protection or development.

To begin, people visit foreign countries to see the specialties of that country has which their own country doesn't have. The beautiful the art and culture the more it attracts the tourism. For instance, in India, government has built the highest statue in the world. Initially, there was criticism that government is simply wasting the money. However, within a month the the break even point has been reached and now there are profits as most of the people from different countries are visiting that place. The above example states that art is the fundamental thing that draws attention.

Further, there will be many artists and who are not recognized because of lack of opportunities. However, if the government does minimal efforts to bring up the talent in their country then there will be 2 advantages: 1. People will get noticed and can earn money. 2. The more the arts the better is for the country. For instance, consider Mona Lisa painting. People are automatically attracted to it and they want to see the painting at any cost. This scenario states that because of curiosity people are tend to see that rated art at any cost. Few people spends a huge amount of money for small painting because they feel it is the privilege and it increases their reputation.

However, countries must focus on the military too. Because if people are sleeping at night in peace, it is all because of the military people who are staying up awake at night to guard the borders. Government should spend money on safety equipment's such as shield, guard, helmet etc. There are few countries which provides less quality weapons and equipment just to save the money. But it is equally important that government should guard the people who are servicing at the borders.

Government should consider keeping up few events to bring up the art and culture in their country so that not only the country people but whole world can turn into their country. This helps in bringing up the peace among the countries.

Average: 5 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
Essays by the user:


Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...hat country has which their own country doesnt have. The beautiful the art and culture...
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ting the money. However, within a month the the break even point has been reached and n...
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ting the money. However, within a month the the break even point has been reached and n...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, then, whereas, for instance, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1980.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87684729064 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48958250784 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475369458128 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3872378701 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04166666667 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116952502661 0.243740707755 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393996619876 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355897750614 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744253962347 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367328711351 0.0667264976115 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.