Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.

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Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear.

Funds by government need to be judiciously managed for the country to progress whether it is is in terms of science, infrastructure,education, resources etc. Therefore the risks or consequences of performing a scientific research if known before hand can be of cardinal advantage to the country.

Risk analysis in any field plays an important role , whether we are creating a software, constructing a building or doing research. Risk analysis helps in assesment of the consequences to decide whether the juice is worth the squeeze or not. Oppenheimer research in nuclear elements gave mankind the most destructive weapon on the planet. he spent the rest of his years touting against its use. Therefore the consequence of research can be devestating and if initally his funds would have been cut, we would have been living in a world without atomic bomb. Therefore, if the consequnces of such an invention were known it would have benefited the society more.

Government needs to manage funds in such a way that every vocation can progress for overall development of country .Therefore, Analyzing the consequences before hand is beneficial to other fields. Sometimes the outcome of a research can be nothing , which puts pressure on the government - research for altenative fuels in space has been going downhill and the funding required for pursuing such a research is grandiloquent. These funds could be used in construction of public schools which would have increased the literacy rate on a long term basis therefore realization about ramifications before they occur can be beneficial to society .

Resreach can benefit the society, but the estimation of the harm it may or may not do is important. The Resources and funds our limited, not only ramifications can help in risk analysis but it can also help in preventing economic tragedies like hyper-inflations. As the government controls the currency, if the funds are spent, they have to print more money in order to overcome and support society which ultimately impacts the society in a negative way , the amount of stuff that we could buy for 10 $ has reduced in last 20 years. Therefore the problem of funding is much bigger, the student loans are piling up and the economic state has taken the shape of a bubble , if this bubble bursts recession will strike. Hence, research funding as well as other fundings should be granted based on their consequences.

Although, sometimes it is difficult to anticipate the ramifications of complex sceintific research before hand because of the arcane nature of the job. Still having a little bit of inkling about the ramifications can save millions.

In conclusion, it is important to understand the consequences before granting funds as funds are the key to all tasks.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2324.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14159292035 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09783237499 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9330661401 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.315789474 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7894736842 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21052631579 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256838576062 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768791728341 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646661080766 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137219466144 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491442193637 0.0667264976115 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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