Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Politcal leaders are cynosure of whole country. Accountable to the people of the country for their actions, which need to be very deliberate. Children and youth of a country look upto their political leader and if these political leader do not stick to their principles, they set bad examples which cannot be good for the country. Effectiveness as a concept should be considered for long term rather than full-filling short term goals. Although, sometimes there is a neccessity for principles to be compromised, but whenever these compromises occur , it comes at a great cost.
Reliability is the key in effective functioning of the government and country. Leaders can't be relied if they do not have principles. Hugh Hefner bribed officals in the New york city for opening his club against his principles, it was something which had to be done for sustaining the business. Intially the business did well but after an investigation Hefner was charged with bribery - led to reduction in sales of his magzines and damaged his reputation. Men and youth considered him as an epitome of a man with principles. Ultimately, if you break your own principles to keep the boat afloat it is going to damage your reputation and the effectiveness which you were trying to achieve in the first place.
If leaders observe that they can get things done via unprincipled means, it corrupts the system, makes it more venal. Political leaders are liable for effective functioning of country. The cycle of venality orginates at very top with political leaders as a requirement of effectiveness but it serves to only worsen the situation - sounds ironic as attempts into improve the effectiveness leads to lack of effectiveness.
During the Rahul Gandhi era, People were suffering in the government offices. Long queues of angry people waiting for pensions, Driving License registration and other government related problems. Even after patiently waiting people were not able to get their work done as major percentage of employees working in govenrment sector require bribes to work. But, the election of Modi,being a principled man served to eradicate this bribery from the system and today almost everybody looks at their Prime minister with respect. The country is prospering today in all the sectors whether it may be food , education , Business etc. . All of this is achieved because of Modi's will power to do the right thing.
Compromises in principles may assist in achieving short terms goals , but sooner or later there is a price which every unprincipled leader has to pay. Construction of bridges with low quality raw material has become the cause of collapse in bridges, thousands of innocent tax paying people suffer because of the compromise in principles. In short term it supported people by spillting the traffic , but the bridge collapsed at the end.
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...upported people by spillting the traffic , but the bridge collapsed at the end.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, so, well, as to, in short, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2387.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13333333333 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88977342801 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556989247312 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7169683068 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.782608696 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2173913043 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13043478261 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208925403983 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621522503388 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467888955637 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116938842037 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493035326355 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.