The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

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The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

Humans are the most efficient and smart living organism on this earth. Therefore, to perform the tase which are beyond the human capacities, machines (simple or complex) are invented and have a wide range of applications. While some people agree to the author's view about the human mind being always superior to the machines, I beg to differ and state most conspicuous reasons to rear my standpoint.

The invention of machines is done to make things easier and with perfection that is hard to achieve when performed by our hands. As machines made are for the specific task hence it can perform without the interferences. For instance, the household appliances like a washing machine for washing our clothes and dryer for drying the soaked clothes, vacuum cleaner for efficiently cleaning the house as well as mixer grinder that helps in grinding our spices as condiments, makes the task much easier and efficient than when done by us. Also, they are more accurately done by minimizing the scope of error and reduces human labor by saving time that can be utilized to perform the probabilistic tasks. In short, human lives are driven by the machines, therefore it seems imperative to say that machines are superior in performing the task given to them.

There are things that cannot be done without the help of the machines. For example, the invention of airway helps the human civilization in transporting the goods and materials to places far away from each other in less amount of time. It also helps as the medium of commutation between two continent that is widely separated by the vast ocean. Going from India to the USA can be done within a few hours as compared to many weeks before the commercial airlines were invented. In terms of architecture, we can now build complicated bridges and building within a year or two as compared to decades before. Therefore, these machines not only make complicated things easier but also makes us dependent upon them.

At last, the advancement in electronics in collaboration with machine learning and artificial intelligence drives our lives in making crucial decisions that cannot be done before. Cellular and Internet access within phones and laptops help us to communicate all around the world. The research and development in AI assistant provided us with Siri and Google duplex that can replicate us and perform the task on our behalf. It seems like we are primarily dependent on machines that we have invented to make our lives easier.

In conclusion, the aforementioned facts give a clear vision that machines are not just the tools created by the human mind but also integrated into our lives as we move along with them.

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Average: 8.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: continents
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'compared' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'compares'.
Suggestion: compares
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 451.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.955654102 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68889406216 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527716186253 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.554021707 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.631578947 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7368421053 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256768973854 0.243740707755 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795583120363 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633395028607 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159035110628 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700681942742 0.0667264976115 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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