The human minds will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.
Human minds are the most complicated things that the Almighty ever made. It is the main processor through which we think, we critique, we judge and execute our actions . Once the thinking process starts in our minds, we find canvases to convert it from logical world to the physical world.A machine is that physical entity, which are the best ever innovations that the human minds literally think. As the claims says that human minds will always be superior to machine but in the latter part the author mentions that, machines are only tools of human minds, it is seemingly true and would support evidences further for my position against the latter part of the claim.
The machine is always designed to make the life much better.They are made to save time, money, and give the most precise skill set needed for working of difficult task. When human started the innovation of machines, the human life has been at an ease by then. Today, we live in a machine -dependent world, we are surrounded by machine in our day-to-day life.For an instance, we start our day we cup of coffee made by a coffee maker and end it up by watching the television. All such innovations are only because the human mind started imagining the things which could benefit human race all over. Every thing, which is operated implicitly or explicit is a machine.Wherever , human intrusion is not possible, for an example, to measure the depth of the oceans and for the study of geographical conditions of the marine life in deep ocean beds, it is hardly possible for human to reach without any scientific equipment, but then machine again played a vital role, in innovation of ultrasonic sound waves which helps to determine the ocean dept and submarines to reach to the ocean beds.
Moreover, this was possible due to human mind dare to think , in a different way ,for an instance, the earliest time measurement was the sundial, this was used to determine the time by the position of the sun in the ancient period. Then slowly the watches were introduced , which was the earliest and smallest ever machine innovated and it is miraculous to notice that how the logic was developed by the human minds and helps to think us the really the human minds have always been superior to the machine.The automobile vehicles which we use in our daily life is also one of the biggest and helpful machine invented by the human minds.It was the early man on this earth, who observed that the round objects if connected by shafts and platform placed can help him to carry tree logs easily and therefore with this great thinking , it was carried forward to further generations from the bullock cart to the luxurious car of the current times.
Furthermore,the human minds are of the nature of critical reasoning, which tends to think in different ways. The machine are now loaded with human emotions also. The technology has been so advanced that, the human-like decision are given by the machines as well.But this is possible only after the intelligence is loaded onto the machine.For an instance, a robot, it has human-like components, though, it performs the tedious tasks which are out of the human reach and whereas little perfection is observed when the same tasks are performed by the humans. So such robots can be helpful in almost all the fields, including manufacturing of automobiles vehicles, in medical fields to determine the patient's agony and predict the reasons for the possible diseases and so on. The machines are designed in such a ways that can assist human, like a companion to make things work faster and save more time, so the human can utilize this saved time in other important tasks.
To sum up, the machines are the grounds for human minds to perform their thinking ability and bring it to physical state, which can be perceived physically.When a machine is designed, it also comes with the inevitable possibility that it may encounter failure at times, at such time instances it is the human mind which help the machine to overcome the faults and serve better for which it is designed . The machines help humans in enhancing their capability of thinking and logical and give the pathway for the most innovative projects to be accomplished. As mentioned above evidences, it would not be wrong to concede that the machines are just the tools for the human minds and the hence the regard the human minds superior to the machines.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216281895504 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.170109356015 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.111786148238 0.0880659088768 127% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0498177399757 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041312272175 0.0444667217837 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106925880923 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.041312272175 0.0406280797675 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58039577407 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352369380316 0.030933414821 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00243013365735 0.0016655270985 146% => OK
Determiners: 0.126366950182 0.0997080785238 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0121506682868 0.0249443105267 49% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0206561360875 0.0148568991511 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4427.0 2732.02544248 162% => OK
No of words: 766.0 452.878318584 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77937336815 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.26086542369 4.58838876751 115% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31592689295 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246736292428 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171018276762 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10182767624 0.132149295362 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58039577407 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 347.0 219.290929204 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453002610966 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.9568031408 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 40.3157894737 23.380412469 172% => OK
Sentence length SD: 160.221660862 59.4972553346 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.0 141.124799967 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.3157894737 23.380412469 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.674092028746 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.21349557522 556% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 64.9894187165 51.4728631049 126% => OK
Elegance: 1.39534883721 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.432077084613 0.391690518653 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.165804909621 0.123202303941 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.089334365846 0.077325440228 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.654918808655 0.547984918172 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162746857748 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222734207718 0.161403998019 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111936226694 0.0892212321368 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.606981941834 0.385218514788 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0507835677636 0.0692045440612 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33820771061 0.275328986314 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591919179609 0.0653680567796 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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