If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We all have some or the other goals in life. without goals life in boring, mundane and meaningless. It is always said that "We are born with a purpose on this blue planet.". Each and everyone is fighting each day behind some goal, may be small or may be big. We try different things to achieve our goals. Sometime is become difficult to understand that, the step we are taking to fulfill our prime objective is good or bad. I partially agree with author that we could justify any step taken to fulfill our goals for following three reasons.
First, how should we decide whether the dream focus we have is worthy for the step we are taking or not? worthiness of goal is based on personal viewpoint. For Example, Killing someone could be worth goal for someone, but for most of us it is not. A psycho person could feel satisfied by killing another human or a suicide bomber think killing a few innocent people is the worth of his life, Is this goals really worth? Hence, I think that there is very fine line between what is really worth or worthless.
Second, the step we are taking to meet our goals could be justifiable in the viewpoint of the person taking that steps, for other this step could be wrong.For Example, A student may have prime object to clear the exam. The goal of clear a school or college exam could be a worthy goal, but if the student is doing some malpractices to pass the exam, then is this steps justifiable for the worthy goal? Even though the goal is worth but the step we take should be appropriate to achieve it. One cannot justify anything he do to achieve his or her goals.
Finally, Sometimes it could also happen that the goal is really a worth, but the step taken is unjustifiable as per our society. In such circumstances, one could take such steps and could justify it later by setting a example in the society. For Example, In India around 18th century womens were not allowed study or go to school. There was a notion that a women has only a worth objective to manage the household work. To break this notion the great leader savitribai phule started first women school in pune at that time. The goal of girl education was unworthy for society back then and the step taken by savitribai phule to educate girls was unjustifiable. Later when people started understanding girls education importance, then step taken by savitribai phule seems justifiable and the goals seems worthy in the eyes of the society. Hence, At times to break the notion for a really worthy goal any step taken could be justifiable.
In conclusion, one need to have a proper understanding of the worthiness of his or her goals and one cannot always take any unscrupulous step and justify.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...l have some or the other goals in life. without goals life in boring, mundane and meani...
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Line 2, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Worthiness
...rthy for the step we are taking or not? worthiness of goal is based on personal viewpoint....
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ent people is the worth of his life, Is this goals really worth? Hence, I think that...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...eps, for other this step could be wrong.For Example, A student may have prime objec...
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Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ieve it. One cannot justify anything he do to achieve his or her goals. Finally,...
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Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s and could justify it later by setting a example in the society. For Example, In...
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Line 4, column 356, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...r go to school. There was a notion that a women has only a worth objective to manage th...
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Line 4, column 358, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...go to school. There was a notion that a women has only a worth objective to manage th...
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Line 4, column 590, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n was unworthy for society back then and the step taken by savitribai phule to ed...
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Line 4, column 703, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'girls'' or 'girl's'?
Suggestion: girls'; girl's
...Later when people started understanding girls education importance, then step taken b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, really, second, so, then, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58024691358 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49351815983 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5082644011 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.04 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.44 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121652128675 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419349485129 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360785378436 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781785458073 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136420420903 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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