ISSUE TOPIC: The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
The issue is whether or not the real talent of a famous musician cannot exactly be assessed until the musician has been dead for
several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with kind assessment. I defy this statement because people are famous before their rip.
Firstly, For a real talent their is no age. This means anyone can famous in their particular field. For Musician also their is no age for became a celebrity. In this modern era, there is manifold singer in various singe field: Hip hop, pop, and so on. Some Musician are famous at young age. For instance, Justin biber is world famous singer in this era, and he tyro at the age of 17, so their time period for show your prowess.
Secondly, Famous Musician is remember for several generations. Because of their real talent. They Play music and their song are attached to the folk. folk are hear the song the they are love in that song. This Mean person is break-up in relationship and he is listening break-up love song, or he is in love then he hearing a love Music. Peeps are also listening music because some have hobby, or pastime.
Meanwhile, Some People are famous by their dead. for example, Micheal Jackson(MJ) is a well know and famous person in musician of 19th century. MJ is first hip-hop dancer and musician, and now he is become a history of a musician every dancer follow his path.
On the whole, The original statement is veracity. The real talent of people are famous by how they show to the whole, not famous by their dead. Because Folk have to perform various time in the front of whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The issue is whether or not the real talent of a famous musician ca...
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Line 1, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her ...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this statement because people are famous before their rip. Firstly, For a real...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...heir rip. Firstly, For a real talent their is no age. This means anyone can famous...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...eir particular field. For Musician also their is no age for became a celebrity. In th...
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Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... Hip hop, pop, and so on. Some Musician are famous at young age. For instance, Just...
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Line 4, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at young age. For instance, Justin biber is world famous singer in this era, and ...
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remembered'.
Suggestion: remembered
...rowess. Secondly, Famous Musician is remember for several generations. Because of the...
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Line 6, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an is remember for several generations. Because of their real talent. They Play music a...
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Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Folk
...nd their song are attached to the folk. folk are hear the song the they are love in ...
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Line 6, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'heard'.
Suggestion: heard
...song are attached to the folk. folk are hear the song the they are love in that song...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...hed to the folk. folk are hear the song the they are love in that song. This Mean person...
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Line 6, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d he is listening break-up love song, or he is in love then he hearing a love Mus...
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Line 8, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
..., Some People are famous by their dead. for example, Micheal JacksonMJ is a well kn...
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Line 10, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re famous by how they show to the whole, not famous by their dead. Because Folk h...
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Line 10, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o the whole, not famous by their dead. Because Folk have to perform various time in th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57839721254 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27983756298 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491289198606 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 704.065955056 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1268767708 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.35 23.4991977007 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290856276683 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936373325593 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16343274959 0.0758088955206 216% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193201613477 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148487647103 0.0667264976115 223% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 14.1392134831 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 48.8420337079 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.