It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Who is are heroes? Do they exist in real or are they just a figment of our imagination? Who do we call a hero? Is it someone like Gandhi who stands by his principles of non-violence, equality, freedom and brings about a social movement which freed the people of a country? Or is it someone like superheroes of our favourite fantasy series who bashes villains?
I think heroes are epitomise the morals and principles that a society still values. This is what makes a hero, a hero be it a real one or someone fictionally created! I think to claim the society today can longer regard any living man or woman is not correct at all. Heroes and society create one another. Our history and present is replete with such examples.
A Swedish teenager in Europe was so pained by the inertness of adults to tackle climate change that she boycotted school everyday to sit in front of the Parliament demanding them to act and act soon. She is Greta Thumberg. She is a living example and has been hailed a hero for leading from the front. She inspired hundred thousands of school going children to march for climate and compel their governments to take cognizance and introspect on their stand on climate change. UK being one of such countries. She is being considered for nomination for the Nobel Peace Prize by her country. Yes, she is a hero, Nobel Prize or not.
Speaking of award winners like ones who have received Nobel Prizes, Magasaysay Awards, Bravery Awards, Literary Awards, Entertainment Awards are heroes in their own might and right! Some are scientific and academic consummates like scientists and economists, some are social workers like Dr. Prakash Amte while some are people like Nelson Mandela who epitomise social movements and human values.
Society draws inspiration from time and again and these heroes help make societies. Dr. Ambedkar, the architect of Constitution of India, had long ago cautioned against the perils of hero worship. People place heroes on a pedestal that is very high and this is fatal for both the society and the hero equally. The fanatism along with the narcissism of the hero indicates doom.
I don’t think our have our morals degraded that no one can be hailed as a hero. Our society still values like equality, freedom, fraternity. So why do we need one hero when we can be heroes and heroines of our everyday lives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'epitomised'.
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... bashes villains? I think heroes are epitomise the morals and principles that a societ...
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...ciety still values. This is what makes a hero, a hero be it a real one or someone...
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...! I think to claim the society today can longer regard any living man or woman is...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...limate change that she boycotted school everyday to sit in front of the Parliament deman...
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...iled a hero for leading from the front. She inspired hundred thousands of school go...
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Suggestion: hundred thousand
...or leading from the front. She inspired hundred thousands of school going children to march for clim...
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Suggestion: a hundred
...or leading from the front. She inspired hundred thousands of school going children to m...
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...s in their own might and right! Some are scientific and academic consummates like...
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...ndela who epitomise social movements and human values. Society draws inspirati...
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...as a hero. Our society still values like equality, freedom, fraternity. So why do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, while, i think, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.804400978 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57387197133 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537897310513 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 79.9564877327 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.875 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161630306664 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513148007862 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460458095708 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0857112123737 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608555281001 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.