Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developi

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Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Laws should consider the positions, time, and circumstances in few cases where necessary.

A few laws should take a few circumstances into account. For example, the laws regarding the Indian national anthem state that all citizens must stand up in attentive position when the anthem is being played. A person who has fractured a leg will not be able to stand up and should not be punished for breaking the law.

When we consider criminal laws such as murder, a few murders may be committed due to self defense and could not be avoided. Even though the guilty person is supposed to be sentenced to death, the law should consider these scenarios and award a few years of prison instead.

Although the laws should be flexible, the circumstances must be validated before consideration. Recalling the murder example given in the earlier paragraph, the judge may consider providing relief only if there was no other way to avoid the murder. Moreover, A burglar should be punished as per the criminal law and must not have any concessions because he was poor and required money.

However, few laws are fundamental and do not have any exceptions. For example, there is no exception to the rule in the GRE examination that the name of the candidate must match the name in the Identity proof.

Hence, laws should be flexible but they must validate the circumstances before consideration.

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Average: 3.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 58.6224719101 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 234.0 442.535393258 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7849512896 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3765819004 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.75 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151092501485 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067964976149 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040385394969 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847748736278 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421655338168 0.0667264976115 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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