Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Laws and regulations form a basis of every civilized society. With the absence of legal system our society will turn into anarchy, when culprits will make crimes without being punished. Therefore, the clear and strict regulations and laws are intended to protect every member of the society. The issue is should these strict laws to be flexible, given the special circumstances, times and places? I believe that too flexible laws will introduce multiple interpretations and will prevent the legal system from distribution of justice.
Given the laws are flexible and taking into account various circumstances, some individuals will find it easy to escape judgement. Even now, with a strict legal system, the justice depends on the persuasive skills of defendant's lawyers. The well skilled lawyer can safe a culprit form jail, manipulating the different laws and highlighting circumstances that demonstrate the innocence of his/her client. With additional flexibility, the lawyers will be given more space to act, thus vindicating individuals, committed more atrocious crimes. Therefore, extended flexibility of the laws will result in most of the criminals escaping their punishment, leading to degradation of the legal system.
With flexible laws there will be hard to determine when to employ this or that particular law. deleterious effects on society. Example movies labeled '18+'. If a law, prohibiting the kids to watch it will be flexible enough, say, allowing some circumstances when kids are with parents. The effects of imposing such amendments to the law will be deleterious for kids' mind, prone to stress and inducing different phobias.
The adherence to flexible laws will be hard to monitor. Indeed, if for example, a law prohibits to cut trees younger than 10 years old, but has an amendment, that a young tree can be cut if it is affected by some sort of fungi or other disease. Some individuals will definitely find ways to get around the corresponding controlling services and use this amendment to cut healthier trees. It will result in uncontrolled deforestation with unpredictable consequences for the environment.
Flexibility of laws will introduce more fuzzinness into legal system in form of overlapping or contradictory laws, thus making it even harder for judges to distribute justice. Take for instance laws prohibiting factories to dispose sewage waters in local rivers. If these laws are flexible enough to allow their violation during some circumstances, than, in fact, they are contradictory to the initial purpose of saving the environment. It doesn't matter, if a factory will adhere them or not, the consequence for the environment will be the same. Therefore, the clear formulation of laws, preventing multiple interpretations, is essential to provide proper judgement.
To conclude, I believe, that despite the circumstances, the legal system must adhere the strict and precise laws. Only this way it would be possible to provide a proper judgement and prevent serious crimes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in fact, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2553.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39746300211 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06874367753 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515856236786 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4729436982 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1923076923 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1923076923 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03846153846 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158123092054 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522255028583 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424701733539 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920117893934 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308923334583 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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