In most professions and academic fields, imagination is more important than knowledge.
There is no doubt that imagination is the unique talent of human-being. Imagination makes people can fulfill any fantastic grand achievement in their brain; Imagination helps people construct complicated buildings, form intricated theory and think the great cosmos without doing any physical movements. And no one can deny that imagination has posed an profound leverage in human`s history, even more important than knowledge in most professions and academic fields. I have substantial reasons to bolster my position. A few of them include:
At first, there are so many professions and academic fields request open-minded thinking and fancy imagination, especially in today`s information era. Take, the invention and proliferation of mobile phone, for example. When Bell first invented the telegraph and phone, the convenience of them had conquered most people and thought they are the future of human`s communication. But it`s liberate imagination broke the handcuffs of banal knowledge, give more fantastic, new perspective to broaden people`s horizons and advanced this progress of the invention of mobile phone, which has deeply entwined with modern life.
In addition, imagination also plays a vital role in exploration of totally unknown fields of science and make a solid base for further research. Without irreplaceable and unparalleled imagination, there will be many significant discoveries disappearing in history. Let`s think about what life would be like if we live in a world without paper, sheets, books and so on. It is paper that totally changed human history and make it possible to document every important event and every famous person in human history. And all of those need be attributed to a person`s great imagination in Han dynasty of China who invented paper and benefit whole humankind.
All in all, from bicycle to automobile, for plane to space shuttle, from toothbrush to laptop, all of those are outcomes of human imagination. Yes, they are just a single thought of one single person at first, and who imagined those things did not all really construct the automobile or plane or laptop. But without those crazy imaginations, what we can obtain is nothing, we will still live in a pristine life, eat raw meat, sleep in cave like a monkey. So I agree with the view that, imagination is more important than knowledge in most professions and academic fields with all my heart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 351, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...one can deny that imagination has posed an profound leverage in human's histo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, still, for example, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36103896104 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02590825412 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576623376623 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4102203072 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.411764706 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6470588235 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26524293773 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777143413973 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123299061388 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155819340157 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844006306827 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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