“A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.”Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the pos

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“A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.”

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

There is a great diversity of policies related to educational curriculum in the different countries. In several countries, there is no national curriculum that dictates the courses that students are required to take to graduate from high school and no guidelines are instituted by the government about how the different courses should be taught to students. In other countries, such as Greece a national curriculum is instituted accompanied by policies about the materials that should be taught to students. Advantages and disadvantages exist in both systems of educations. However, the existence of a national curriculum developed by pundits with deep knowledge about the courses and that contains a number electives among which the students are allowed to choose to attend, is potential the best solution to guide education of students before their entrance in college.

First and foremost, the existence of a national curriculum guarantees that all students have been exposed to foundational ideas that form the background for advanced knowledge in more specialized fields. Courses, such as mathematics and language constitute the building blocks upon which students can be based to develop expertise in almost all disciplines. Basic knowledge of mathematics advances skills such as critical thinking and logic which are necessary in all fields. A wide range of disciplines borrow mathematical properties to flourish. For example, in psychology statistics is an indispensable tool that allows for inference. Without it psychology would not be separated, from philosophy and the study of the human mind would be restricted to mere observation. Even disciplines that do not directly use mathematics to test hypotheses, require qualities that can only be developed through training the mind in analyzing patterns and test assumptions. Art is an example of such a discipline where attention to detail and estimation differentiate an admirable piece of art from a haphazard drawing.

The development of language skills at the time enables the clear articulation of ideas and the adept communication of these ideas to other people. Students who never had an adequately developed language course most likely lag behind their peers in communication skills. Communication skills provide a means through which ideas take shape and can be challenged or hailed. For example, if a physics student has an idea about how to test the string theory, but he/she cannot articulate this idea and convey it to collaborators there is chance that little attention will be payed to it and potential will never see the light of testing. In addition, an expert talking about the deleterious effects of a chemical substance about which the general population should cautious, but without the skills to convey his findings in an understandable way no policies would be developed and the public would not be properly protected.

However, the establishment of a national curriculum should contain a number of electives that students can decide to attend based on their interests and career orientations. Students need the flexibility to explore subjects that may be of interest and based on that make a final choice about their future careers. Therefore, should be exposed to a variety of stimuli individualized to their needs.

In conclusion, a national curriculum comprising both basic courses that prepare them for any future endeavor and electives more selected by the individual student will give the students the foundational knowledge along with a more specialized knowledge that fits their individual needs.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3045.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 558.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45698924731 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86024933743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07036322022 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476702508961 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 963.9 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5963922864 60.3974514979 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.409090909 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161279971266 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497879300074 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423971601609 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973258101592 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03490931919 0.0667264976115 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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