"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter
college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic
courses to offer."
This topic raises the controversial issue of whether a nation should require all of its students
to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college. The children of a nation are
its future. Along with becoming successful and independent , they are the ones to carry the
responsibility of the nation. Indisputably, if the students of the nation study the same
curriculum the base or knowledge provided to each and every student will be equal.
Nevertheless, I dont agree with opinion that all the students should study the same
curriculum.
First of all , in a country there are students with eclectic intellectuals and each of them having
different interests. For all the students to study the same portion for almost a decade might be
of no use for them. If a particular individuals interest is not piqued in the subjects they are
lawfully forced to study, it might all be in vain. To illustrate, let us look at the example of the
great legend Sachin Tendulkar . If back then Sachin Tendulkar would have been forced to
study like all other children then today he would not have been called the God Of Cricket or
The Masterblaster.
Furthermore, when a student is pressurized to study a subject that is not bound to be for him
or her , it will disrupt not only the education of that child but it will affect the childs brain. It
is noticed when a deslexsic student who is not able to read or remember properly the studies ,
but when exposed to music or paintings remembers it all perfectly . Why is that so? Its all
because of interest. Not only that if a student tries to study but does not remember what he or
she is doing , it might foment up stress level of the students giving rise to various illness.
Both common sense and personal experience have told us that a student must do or opt for
the course in which they are interested in , it will not only be beneficial for the student but
will also become an asset to the nation.
Admittedly, its not that all the students have a fixed goal right form a certain age , so for that
it is also essential that a particular part of the curriculum must remain common for the
students which will bring equanimity and a certain common standard for the students.
In conclusion , although the students must have a common background but it is essential for
them to grow profound in what they actually want to do .So a curriculum must offer different
courses for different students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2058.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76388888889 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68245659633 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2033089962 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 4.97078651685 543% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300607709273 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110859756633 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975439107947 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920437676276 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961090099426 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.