"A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter
college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic
courses to offer."
Education is the ladder to success. We all know that a well-educated nation is already a developed nation. But different schools with different boards follow a different curriculum. Which among those can be said to be the better curriculum? Is there any way to determine, studying which curriculum shall ensure this success and development? We can say a mixture of all to engender a curriculum that can be studied throughout the nation.
School is our second home. It is our alma mater. It teaches us the basic and important things in life, which do not differ even if the children are from different states. If in Mexico, two plus two equals four, it stays the same in the United States or Canada.
Same education throughout the nation shall mean all students possessing similar knowledge. This also helps in removing the ideas of superiority and inferiority from an early age of development. A student from the United Nations curriculum is bound to feel a patriotism toward a student from Canada curriculum. These partisan can be avoided.
A national curriculum helps cover all the subjects important for a child. it increases the horizon of knowledge. A child shall learn the culture and history of all states, throughout the nation, which increases his understanding of the country. When cultures meet, they result in something extraordinary and unique, which can lead to a better nation.
When we meet people from different states, interaction with them leads us to learning and understanding a different ideology and thought process, but if from an early age the student is taught the same curriculum as all the others in the nation, he gains the understanding of different ideologies and can implement them to build a better version of himself and the nation.
Thus, we can see that even though different curriculums mean the integration of eclectic ideas, a person can truly develop if the nation studies the same national curriculum until they are old enough to decide the field of interest as they enter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...low a different curriculum. Which among those can be said to be the better curriculum? Is...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...all the subjects important for a child. it increases the horizon of knowledge. A c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the field of interest as they enter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05357142857 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84724849277 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505952380952 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 79.3577343427 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345077202125 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103401997156 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819913487551 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192697048026 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598501206927 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.