A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
School curriculum plays an important role in building up a student's profile. I agree completely with the author that the same national curriculum should be prescribed for students before they enter college.
The most fundamental years of a student's life are the years they spend before entering college. This is the time when their foundations are built for later years in college. If all the students of a nation follow the same curriculum, then there is uniformity in the aptitude level of students.
Moreover, no student gets to obtain advantage just because the student is studying under a different curriculum. This is very essential to maintain harmony amongst various sections of society who may differ by their caste, creed or community.
In addition to this, I would mention that even students who study in their native language should get an opportunity to study the same curriculum as it would keep them at par with the rest of the students who study in internationally accepted language, that is English.
In continuation to above claims, I would say that costs for providing education would substantially come down as the whole nation studies the same curriculum irrespective of their economic standing in the society. This would greatly benefit the poorer sections of society who are unable to afford quality education.
Thus in totality, I don't find any reason for a nation to allow students to study under different curriculum until they enter college. This difference in curriculla would only exacerbate the quality of higher education being imparted to the students as they struggle to overcome their different educational backgrounds.
Hence, I highly recommend the nation to require all students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 286.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32867132867 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81370134388 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531468531469 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3646604247 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.230769231 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295198633042 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129449459431 0.0831039109588 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114449259042 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178430819599 0.150359130593 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105849829286 0.0667264976115 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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