Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
humans are the main culprits in causing manychanges in climate conditions.Every nation is trying to preserve their natural wilderness at any cost in wake of these changes.In my opinion,the assertion made by statement is agreeable because preserving nature may appear like irrelevant task in present modern and burgeoning societies,it would definite;y have a impact in future.
Problems associated with deforestation and other anti nature activities carried out by humans took a huge toll on nature.Deforestation has single handedly wiped out more than half of forest area on earth.The effects are already seen like increase in temperature,depletion of ground water and melting of glaciers.For example,every year lot of forests are sacrificed for construction of buildings,laying out roads and bridges.One one hand,these developments may contribute to the nation on economic side,it is also causing a significant damage to flora and fauna that is indigenous to the nation.Moreover,some species of plants that could be rarely found can act as medicine in curing some deadly diseases are found only in wild areas.This implies that forests are invaluable resources to the nation.
Most of nations tend to neglect the issues of preserving nature as it is not considered as national importance.But effects of abusing nature has shown its effects in the form of disturbed climate cycle and extreme weather conditions.Possible solutions for preserving wild areas include building conservation centres and biodiversity parks.these parks could help in protecting the species of plants and animals that could be extinct if not cared for.
For example,Indian government took a decision to establish a zoological parks and animal care centres in view og protecting the rare species of Royal Bengal tiger from being extinct.The biospher reserve known as Sunderbans is home to approximately 1500 tigers now.these tigers mostly face threat from hunters and poachers.They usually hunt the tigers for their skin and nails that could be traded in black market.This shows that humans are explpiting the nature for their selfish motives.
another best example is China government passing legal laws to protect another species named panda.it is because of these efforts that pandas are still seen in zooliogical parks.While making law for protecting nature is a laudable solution,vit cannot be successfuly implemented until and unless citizens of the nation believe in caring for nature and other living beings.Howeer,in some nations it is required to build and construct infrastructure with sacrificing some of the wild area which is a compulsion.In that case,it is better to take nature friendly decision so that humans could progress without affecting the nature.
To conclude,nature needs to be protected for the future generation as the ever developing human civilisation needs constantly depends on nature for resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2481.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62585034014 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38922703561 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 215.323595506 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59410430839 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 774.9 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 23.0359550562 317% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.349497672 60.3974514979 330% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 413.5 118.986275619 348% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 23.4991977007 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.21951772744 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 7.80617977528 500% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221602108156 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115852112226 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568340531348 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115852112226 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568340531348 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.8 14.1392134831 296% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -19.54 48.8420337079 -40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 12.1743820225 280% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.56 12.1639044944 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.34 8.38706741573 147% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 11.2143820225 278% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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