No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.
No matter in the Universe can exist independently and to bring any change within the matter a lot of factors come into picture.In a way the whole universe is interdependent on each other , be it the food cycle or the advancement in technology. In today's world, if a field of study has to advance unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside its a very tedious task to achieve.
Every field is multidisciplinarian and requires knowledge from other fields as well.The contribution from every field is significant as it helps in building a particular subject.For example , maths works as the base for Physics and any calculations being done in the field of physics require maths concepts.Therefore maths and physics go hand in hand.Even in building a new product we need contributions from every field such as for the manufacturing of an automobile we need engineers from mechanical,electronics , computer science and wind engineering disciplines. The contribution of everyone results in a product.The influence of other fields results in a proper amendment of the base field.
Every human bieng throughout his lifetime focuses in one aspect and tries to master it. In this way everyone are a master in their field. Therefore it is very difficult to get a person who is master of every field.As we know Steve jobs, the founder of Apple was good at marketing but to bring a advancement in his company he needed assistance from the engineering field.He was good at effectively indulging both the fields and hence it resulted in a very successful field popularly known as the era of portable electronics.This also brings a sense of teamwork within the human beings and they are ready to help each other.
The interdependency also arises when a particular matter cannot be dealt properly using that subject knowledge . At such a time if we incorporate the experience of professionals from other fields , they might have faced such a problem.The result which we are trying to get using a particular technique might be obtained easily using a different technique.It will result in mutual benefits for the advancement of both disciplines and as well as establish cordial relations.
Every field of study has its pros and limitations.To reduce or overcome the limitations we must take the help of other disciplines.This in a way is beneficial to both the fields and on the whole a advancement of science.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, as for, as to, for example, such as, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14609571788 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35017280603 2.79657885939 120% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506297229219 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 648.9 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.383870191 60.3974514979 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.3 118.986275619 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.7 23.4991977007 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.21951772744 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394037375337 0.243740707755 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157287978831 0.0831039109588 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12923418134 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214778707792 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778303926814 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 12.1743820225 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.