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<p class="MsoNormal">Education is the ladder to success. We all know that a
well-educated nation is already a developed nation. But different schools with
different boards follow a different curriculum. Which among those can be said
to be the better curriculum? Is there any way to determine, studying which
curriculum shall ensure this success and development? We can say a mixture of
all to engender a curriculum that can be studied throughout the nation.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">School is our second home. It is our alma mater. It teaches
us the basic and important things in life, which do not differ even if the
children are from different states. If in Mexico, two plus two equals four, it
stays the same in the United States or Canada. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Same education throughout the nation shall mean all students
possessing similar knowledge. This also helps in removing the ideas of
superiority and inferiority from an early age of development. A student from
the United Nations curriculum is bound to feel a patriotism toward a student
from Canada curriculum. These partisan can be avoided. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">A national curriculum helps cover all the subjects important
for a child. it increases the horizon of knowledge. A child shall learn the
culture and history of all states, throughout the nation, which increases his
understanding of the country. When cultures meet, they result in something
extraordinary and unique, which can lead to a better nation.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">When we meet people from different states, interaction with
them leads us to learning and understanding a different ideology and thought process,
but if from an early age the student is taught the same curriculum as all the
others in the nation, he gains the understanding of different ideologies and
can implement them to build a better version of himself and the nation.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">Thus, we can see that even though different curriculums mean
the integration of eclectic ideas, a person can truly develop if the nation
studies the same national curriculum until they are old enough to decide the
field of interest as they enter.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"> <o:p></o:p></p>
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...low a different curriculum. Which among those can be said to be the better curriculum? I...
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Line 28, column 14, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ll the subjects important for a child. it increases the horizon of knowledge. A c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.58263305322 5.05705443957 130% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.25782254139 2.79657885939 260% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501400560224 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 222.033368233 60.3974514979 368% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.235294118 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.97078651685 704% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0559398674222 0.243740707755 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298006911654 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255998401836 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0201560951435 0.150359130593 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219562342041 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.88 12.1639044944 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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