People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Right attitude is one of the most important aspect which determines that the person will be successful or not. Our attitude is shaped throughout our life due to various factors like immediate situation, surroundings, friends and society as a whole. The prompt recommends that people's attitude are determined by their current situation or surroundings rather than by the society as a whole. I mostly disagree with this and argue that our attitude is determined by the society as a whole rather than out current situation for the following three reasons.
To begin with, as it is said "Attitude of a person determines his character". Different people have different attitudes which are mostly moulded because of the society. For instance, suppose a person has very optimistic attitude. So even when he fails in a subject or sports he will take this as an opportunity to learn what he did wrong and would not repeat the same mistake again next time. This is called the right attitude in life. On the other hand if a person is pessimistic if he fails at anything he would get depressed and can take extreme measures. So having right attitude in life is necessary. No one is born with optimism or pessimism. These are shaped by our society. Immediate situation or surroundings often help the person to stay happy and find optimism in his failures also, like parents, friends and the people close to that person will help him to grow but society gives him a loser tag, due to which the child who was very happy and joyous in the beginning, became pessimistic and took extreme measures, hence his attitude changed due to the society.
Secondly, if a person has fierce attitude and talks rudely with everyone, this attitude was developed because of his constant frustration with work or studies. Suppose his immediate surroundings that is home or his surroundings like the place where he lives and where he grew up can mould the attitude of a person to a certain extent but in the end society plays the major role in shaping his attitude when he grows up. As they quote "Either you win or you learn", this is the right attitude, but one negative emotion outpowers all the positive emotions. So if the person is calm and patient throughout his childhood due to this immediate situation and surroundings, but when he grows up if someone comments negative about him he could get frustrated and his attitude eventually changes.
Further, now as they say "Every situation has two perspectives". A situation is two sides of the same coin. In some cases, immediate situation and surroundings can be more impactful in determining the attitude of the person than the society. For example, suppose if a boy is really poor and is always mistreated due to his colour, race or ethnicity from the beginning, he lives in place where there are no proper facilities and everyone around has no perspective to grow so in this case his surroundings and current situation will impact the attitude of the person in a greater extent than the society. Childhood determines the whole life of a person and if it is not proper then it is very difficult for the person to become successful.
Of course, there are many more factors to decide success, but right attitude and confidence are the key. As we have analyzed both the sides of the argument we can see always there are pros and cons to every situation, so there are no easy answers. But society as a whole can have a lot of impact in deciding the attitude of the person, so we should always learn from our mistakes, keep growing and hustling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 677, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is immediate situation and surroundings, but when he grows up if someone comments...
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Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'see'.
Suggestion: always see
...d both the sides of the argument we can see always there are pros and cons to every situat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, of course, in some cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2986.0 2235.4752809 134% => OK
No of words: 620.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81612903226 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98996985923 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79537115531 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416129032258 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 970.2 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.4035010284 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.846153846 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252582164042 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797411463617 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696741231874 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158300174202 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820858313433 0.0667264976115 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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