People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Everyone is bound to face situations where they must make certain decisions, some important, some casual, some safe and straightforward, while some risky. I believe that any and every decision or action we take should be a calculated one and therefore, I strongly agree with the statement. I shall elaborate on the legible reasons to support my opinion.
Every decision has its own set of consequences and when we end up being in an adverse situation after we take a certain action, then the feeling of regret follows. Most risky actions are worth consideration only because they have a potential to return high rewards. However, most of the times, it also comes with a high loss if the action fails to yield a favourable outcome. When such actions are hasty, or miscalculated, then they are bound to result in a failure, if not for an occasional fluke or a lucky strike. When the inevitable happens in such cases, a person gets disappointed and in severe cases, one may end up in a life threatening or compromising scenario. Take an example of a stock trader or a businessman. Most of them know where the big money is and most of them know how they may get to it. Yet, the experienced ones always pace their steps to analyse the possible, but unknown adversaries, to take fool-proof actions. Wise men (and women) always consider biding their time before playing their cards.
Furthermore, taking justified actions may mean more than avoiding a crisis. Sometimes, it may also mean not missing out on something better. A feeling of regret not only follows when one makes a bad decision, it also knocks at our door when we realise that we left something on the table that could have easily been ours. When it comes to risky actions, many may also have a hidden and safe or just an overall a better choice, which can also be referred to sometimes, as an escape route. Realising such choices takes composure, deeper analysis and a proper brainstorming. For instance, many people end up shelling out a lot of money in haste and end up being under debt of credit cards, during the sales at the end of the calendar year, only to discover that if they would have waited a little longer, they could have considered buying an updated or modern version of what they bought. With more planning, they could have enjoyed less, but better products, without a debt and a much-appreciated sense of satisfaction.
On the top of this, taking a well-weighted decision shows maturity. Taking an action is easy, but taking a reasonable and fruitful one is what comes with age and experience and that is the reason why people try to consult senior citizens or experienced individuals before taking any expensive step. When it comes to risky actions, the adverse outcomes are always overshadowed by the ever-so-alluring positive ones. But it is a personal responsibility to gauge the situation properly and then take an appropriate action because in many cases, such decisions may also affect multiple people or lives. Then, it becomes pivotal to have someone calm-headed and composed in the group, at the wheel.
Some people might not get the time to think, say in emergency situations, to take a justified decision. But in such cases, I believe it is the situational misfortune to not be able to take some time. Apart from such unfortunate events, one must always think and act, especially in case of risky situations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...n ours. When it comes to risky actions, many may also have a hidden and safe or just an ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 768, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had waited'?
Suggestion: had waited
...dar year, only to discover that if they would have waited a little longer, they could have consid...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for instance, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 14.8657303371 209% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2822.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 585.0 442.535393258 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82393162393 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9180050066 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80256084432 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500854700855 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 912.6 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3338325154 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.518518519 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25925925926 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192356563485 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497446619298 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035145301321 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104472327661 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342136924635 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 100.480337079 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.