People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Emotions are en-rooted in human's subconscious mind. They are used in expressing our feeling and in largely our behavior. Emotional persons are empathetic and sometimes too much emotions lead to bad decisions. Decisions should be made on logic and consequences of the peripheral environment.
Although some might say that, emotion is the force that drives people, sometimes too much emotion can cause damage if other people's lives are dependent on that decision. People should be rational and they should consider the consequences of their decisions and they might use simulations before taking an important decision. And thinking of the consequences after the decision is taken is plainly wrong. People should think about the perplexity of their decisions before taking them.
Human mind is naturally drive by instincts and emotions always keep the people on their toes and people usually tend to take bad decisions. Before taking the decision, one should mind his surroundings and should think about what his decisions will bring into their lives. They should think about all their scenarios and all possible consequences their decisions might bring. After taking a decision, the situation can't be undone and thinking about bad decisions which are driven by emotion is just a wastage of time. The thing people should do is to think their actions through and think about all the consequences that could change their lives.
US officials at multiple times said that, Iraq didn't have any nuclear mass- destructing weapons and the decision to attack Iraq was rushed. Some officials also expressed sorry that that they took a bad decision. But their sorry won't bring back the thousands of lives and families that were destroyed in the process of the nasty war. They should rely on their intelligence and should not take decisions based on the fact that Iraq is a terrorist country. If rightfully taken, today we might in a peaceful and better world.
Emotion is the basis drive of our subconscious nature and decisions through emotion can sometimes cause a great harm. And thinking about the past bad decisions is not only a wastage of time but it can bring no good. The thing we can do is we can take lessons from our past bad decisions and think through before taking our nest decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ersons are empathetic and sometimes too much emotions lead to bad decisions. Decisio...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'driven'.
Suggestion: driven
...e taking them. Human mind is naturally drive by instincts and emotions always keep t...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... After taking a decision, the situation cant be undone and thinking about bad decisi...
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Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'peoples'.
Suggestion: peoples
...on is just a wastage of time. The thing people should do is to think their actions thr...
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Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...cials at multiple times said that, Iraq didnt have any nuclear mass- destructing weap...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: that
...ed. Some officials also expressed sorry that that they took a bad decision. But their sor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03957783641 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5533209336 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459102902375 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8321134503 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9523809524 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0476190476 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.809523809524 5.21951772744 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147069004944 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572288396263 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394076768399 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972769124563 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197239548669 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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