People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Many people believe that decision making should be made with a logical list of pros and cons and that no matter how emotional of a decision you have to make it's important to have solidified reasoning. However, sometimes that is just not that case, because human nature is flawed and we make decisions based on our moods that day, based on how little or how much we value society's opinions, based on whose opinions matter the most to us - there is a lot at play in decision making! And sometimes, what may be considered a smart decision for one person may not be for another. For some decisions and for certain circumstances being spontaneous or "going with your gut" is important and in other cases, it's important to think about the future implications of your decision. It's all highly contextual.
There are time when one shouldn't avoid the logic of an argument and be blindsided with their emotional involvement in something. This could be something that is causing negativity in your life, like an abusive or violent relationship. Oftentimes, men or women are not aware of the signs and continue to be in a relationship out of love for their partner. But in those cases, decision-making based on emotion is wrong and shouldn't be justified. As is the case when you know you're making a bad decision for yourself or are pushing yourself way too hard. Staying up every night till 5am may not be the best decision for your mental health, although it might be for your friend. Or vice versa. Making decisions in anger or haste is poor decision making and should be carefully thought out. At least that is the case in reality. However, in the lives of celebrities, this hasty decision making is often what leads to infamy, such as a "crazy night on the town" or a "31 day marriage" in the case of Kim Kardashian. Some of these illogical decisions have imposed them to be on a platform where they are constantly watched. That way, even they are successful and making smart career moves, there continues to be that following - such as the case with Kim and her new business.
Decision making with emotions is also really smart in those cases where you really need to "go with your gut" and understand how you're feeling about something. In these cases, there is often no right or wrong answer - such as picking the right job for you or the right college - oftentimes, no matter how much logic you use and how many pros and cons you list, this decision will not become easier and will thus lead to poor decision making, like allowing a friend or a trusted parent to make your decisions for you. Emotion driven decision making is also healthy to exercise when you are doing something impromptu, such as planning a new vacation or wanting to do something fresh - because living everything with reason can often lead to drainage of your energy when it really shouldn't be. I think a particularly crucial time for emotion based decision making is when you are trying to make significant lifestyle changes or are getting over some big changes in life, such as moving to a new city or leaving a significant other. In those cases, it is tough to see the light at the end of the tunnel and oftentimes make some choices based on how you feel, can you help determine more efficiently what will eventually lead to a logical new path of happiness.
So yes, in some cases people who make decisions based on emotion and then justify those decision may be poor decision makers if they are just trying to convince themselves into the wrong things, but more often that not, what is right and wrong is highly dependent on the person, on the situation and how commensurate this decision is to someone's life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, then, thus, at least, i think, such as, you know, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 42.0 19.5258426966 215% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3074.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 652.0 442.535393258 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71472392638 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.05314661074 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60486174811 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 215.323595506 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.437116564417 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 974.7 704.065955056 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.032162868 60.3974514979 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.727272727 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384173998693 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125831047312 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867271031775 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276762439378 0.150359130593 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391056311458 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.