People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Recently, the disparity between emotional and objective decision making skills has occupied the newspaper headlines. While few have been reluctant to let go the conventional objective decision making strategy, the rising importance of arriving at a decision based on emotions has mustered plethora of importance and support recently and its significance undoubtedly overweighs that of the former.
Emotion is the quintessence of humanity and it's the crux on which the entire humanity hinges! Emotion is the only subject which distinguishes between the egregious and the magnanimous acts. Having said that, it wouldn't be superflous to quote that when it comes to decision making, emotional significance ought to play its due role and its vitality should not be gainsaid or overlooked.
In the last decade, when the Indian Government planned to build a dam for the wellfare of the nation- to decrease the dependence on fossil fuels, increase the hydropower resources, contribute to increased GDP- the problems posed by the people indigenous to the area where the dam was to be built was legion. The people around that area had to vacate their homes and go elsewhere to scavenge for a source of living, the entire agricultural land in the nearby area was to abandoned owing to the building of the dam and there was a myriad of practical difficulties the people had to inure to. It was only the emotional analysis of this issue which enabled the Government heed to the pleas of the people, withdraw its plan and allow for the idyllic residence of the people without posing any threat to it.
Emotional decision making enables a prudent judgement of the issue and also allows to analyse the rationality of the matter. While skeptics have opined otherwise quoting an example of a case of man charged with robbery- his helplessness to feed his hungry child made him rob. Though an emotional analysis precludes a severe punishment, inclusion of such emotional ground into such a decision making would broadcast "robbery-as a result of helplessness" harmless and genuine. This statement definitely underscores the drawback of emotional analysis of a matter.
Though an objective analysis occupies the conventional decision making systems across the globe, from homes to the Parliment, an emotional look at the problem would preclude plausible mishaps of a decision. Notwithstanding the paramount importance of emotional attitude to a problem, such an attitude should be clearly curbed from completely influencing a decision making. Im other words, decision making is in fact a multidimensional approach, one of which happens to be emotional approach and logical reasoning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: analysing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, as to, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32470588235 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04944262875 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5378723636 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.642857143 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3571428571 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233740356396 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868765341072 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416141706796 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130694217504 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376326184702 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 48.8420337079 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 100.480337079 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.