People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
In the above passage the author describes the people who makes decision out of their emotions and without logic as poor decision makers.At the first glance the statement might look very legit as decision must be made based on the emotions as it always be however one wants it to be.But generalizing it to all aspects wouldn't help much as the decision effects larger bunch of people or things.
Considering the example of politics.People tend to cast vote for candidates based on caste or creed and not based on their capabilities.In addition to this,they will not think bout the future of the nation and it results in utmost blunder of choosing a candidate who is not capable and this situation is caused by taking the decision based out of emotion.If the decision was taken by logic citizens would choose the best leader for prosperity of the country as they would have made the analysis logically as to who can be the potential candidate .
However,there are few instances people are required to make decision out of their emotions.For example, a mother giving birth to her baby and her family is not financially secured.Killing a baby before birth is considered as a sin in most part of the world.So this is the time where mother should take decision out of her emotions to save the life of a baby.Yet again there comes a thought where decision has to be taken based on login as being prescient in this case is very much necessary because bringing the baby to the world and unable to take care of its needs nothing but just amplifies the problem.So decision should always be made out of login and it should be foresighted.
To sum it up all,the decision taken logically overpowers the decision taken emotionally since if one takes decision logically he or she would be well aware of its pros and cons and would have analysed the situation better and would be foresighted and it always yields the better results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, well, as to, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 334.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75748502994 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69401289944 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508982035928 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 23.0359550562 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.208188858 60.3974514979 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.25 118.986275619 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.5 23.4991977007 355% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.21951772744 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378367400531 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255003606123 0.0831039109588 307% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953868061617 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255003606123 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953868061617 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.7 14.1392134831 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.31 48.8420337079 -9% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 12.1743820225 283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.38706741573 129% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 11.2143820225 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 35.0 11.7820224719 297% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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