People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Decision-making is a skill which is very in demand nowadays. People who have this skill are regarded as good leaders or a strong person.
Decision making involves analyzing the choices which we have to our self and making an informed decision based on that.
Usually, a huge number of people make decisions in a spur of the moment and based on their emotions at that moment of time. This reckless act may amount to boisterous consequences which the person might regret later. When we make decisions on the basis of how we are feeling at a moment, we do not consider all choices extensively. We give unnecessary priority to our emotions at that time. Emotions are a fleeting thing which keeps changing over a period of time. Something, we may favor now, would not necessarily be in our liking in the near future.
Consider, someone makes a hurried decision of buying a car which he saw in an advertisement but does not research about the car. Just based on his emotion of liking the car in that period, he makes this important decision. Then, after some time, he starts to find out faults in them and eventually disliking it.
In a popular book, The Alchemist, there is a boy who goes on a journey to find his treasure. In between, he meets a girl for whom he starts developing an intense liking. Then, based on this emotion of love, he takes a decision to settle with the girl in that place and to stop his journey for the treasure. But, then the alchemist admonishes him, that after a few years, he will start thinking of the treasure again and will soon realize his mistake of not completing his journey. He may also start blaming the girl for his poor decision making.
Thus, anything we decide or choose always has a consequence attached to it. Hence, bearing this in mind, we should make a decision of whose consequence we can live with and be happy about it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 450, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eting thing which keeps changing over a period of time. Something, we may favor now, would not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58928571429 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55275961122 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532738095238 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2374934789 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1578947368 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94736842105 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237625297681 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816428873584 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726524007374 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139589053552 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506362289628 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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