People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Decision making is one of the most complex process human brain have encountered till date. The decision are made on various grounds and their is always a conflict between emotional decision and logical decision.It happens very rarely that the emotional decision is also the logical one, so most of the time one had to make a choice between those.I believe that It is true those people who make emotional decision can and justifies those with logic are poor decision makers.
In my view decision can be classified into two categories Hard decision and soft decision,hard decision are those which do not care about emotions of any living person, and are strictly done for economic growth or particular individual or group, such decision can often be seen in private companies who compel the employs to to lot of hard work without taking care of their health, if some employ is on leave due to the poor health of his parents for more than the stipulated time allotted to him company may even expel him, such decision are categorised as hard decision which are taken by the CEO of the company.Another example of hard decision can be seen in form of establishment of industries by the government , we all are aware pf the alarming situation of the air pollution, then to just to improve the economic growth of the country government are establishing more and more industries.
Decision which belongs to soft category are those which are taken by the "emotional fools".The decision made by them always involve heavy economic loss to bear by them or by their company.These people may even take their company to insolvency just to help their friend who in extreme trouble.And will defend themselves by saying "A friend in need is a friend in deed".which does not makes sense instead they should help in such a way that both should get benefited.
In essence either u can make a logical decision or an emotional decision, there is no harm in taking emotional decision but then people should not try to defend it logically such people do not follow the pragmatic approach of life and other people may even consider them emotional fools
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90136986301 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76459126348 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 23.0359550562 317% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 267.529886181 60.3974514979 443% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 357.8 118.986275619 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.0 23.4991977007 311% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4 5.21951772744 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355261438311 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204003197881 0.0831039109588 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939660418639 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225477557968 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780087358019 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.1 14.1392134831 269% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 48.8420337079 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 12.1743820225 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 31.2 11.2143820225 278% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 32.0 11.7820224719 272% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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