People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Our everyday decisions are biased towards our emotions. It is common for people to take a important decision based on their overwhelming emotions and realising later that thier decision is not the correct one. But instead of confessing this, they come up with a logic justification.
One of the major reason people do this is because they do not want to be judged by others. Though, they know that what they did could have been better, they do not accept that their decision was due to an emotional breakdown but try to justify their actions with some logical reasons. This behaviour militates them from taking logical reasons and they keep on coming with some new logical justifications every time.This may not be the case everytime. Often people believe that taking emotional decisions is a better approach than to take an unanimated logical decision. Everyone has their own reasons to take emotional decisions but some do it out of control while other deliberately.
Taking emotional decision doesnot pose much trouble but trying to come up with a logical but false justification can lead their behaviour to hurt themselves. These people become inveterated to telling lies when asked about their actions. But if their actions breaks a law these lies doesnot help them. Whether logical or emotional their decisions and actions are considered crime and they will be facing charge accordingly.
But we cannot be sure that these decisions are actually worse than logical decisions. There are certain aspects of life that need to be dealt with emotions that logic. Family problems, anxiety attacks, peer pressure are emotional problems and they need a person to think emotionally rather than logically. Eventhough if they come up with logical justification, the reason for doing so might be fear rather than a intention to deceive. When emotional decisions helps people with their lives then that is what they need.
But some decisions need you to be apathetic. They require your professional and logical self to make decisions. Decisions regarding education, job, money demand you to think in a logical manner.
Whether people take emotional or logical decisions their capability as a decision maker cannot be determined.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ear rather than a intention to deceive. When emotional decisions helps people with t...
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...ucation, job, money demand you to think in a logical manner. Whether people take emotional ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, actually, but, if, may, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23822714681 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68940405319 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529085872576 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.979382887 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0476190476 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1904761905 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29434506792 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112184466186 0.0831039109588 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058508234157 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198959907514 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406135553234 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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