People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
To make good decision,people should not only make decision on the basis of emotion or logic. It depends on the different circumstances. So I am conditional with the above statement. For the rational decision, on the basis of the scenario, it may require emotion or logic. People may be a good decision makers on some circumstances when they rely on their emotion at first of all and then afterwards justify their decision on the basis of logic.
There are some scenarios in our life where we tackle so many conflicting feelings between logic and emotion. In some case,we cannot just get a good logic . Logic does not seem to fit in those situations and at that case, we are compelled to use emotion for a rational decision too. For example, If you get besotted with attractive girl/boy, then approaching to unknown people might seem illogical but most of we are compelled to approach her and to start a fresh and a new good relationship.
Some might argue that people can also use logic in love and relationship. But most of the case , use of logic do not result in long lasting relationship. People often use their logic for justification for their decision which are carried by emotion. It might work efficient and useful in some cases. Because thinking on your decision with use of logic after it was implemented, can help to see the proper results and consequences of your decision. People can get better insight on their decision which will helps them in advancement or reparation.
Emotion alone does not work for all situations. Emotions cannot get you on better result on some difficult situations like war , exam time etc. Emotion can be a just a driven impulsive force which may deceive you later .For example, in war if fighter is driven by just emotion and sympathy towards his enemy, then he might escape but almost lose the war. After on wards, repenting on the decision cannot give anything but remorse and dismay. Similarly in exam time, if a student just go swayed by his emotion which may trigger him to do beyond study and involved in time-pass acts, then he cannot do better in exam and after on wards, repenting on the past actions will not correct your failure. Similarly, there are some very nasty, savage acts which are incorrigible like murdering some one which is also mainly driven by emotion.
It is concluded that emotion and logic alone is not sufficient to make a rationale decision for all type of situation
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, similarly, so, then, for example, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2021.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76650943396 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65979682278 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464622641509 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.0055274977 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8636363636 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302337785405 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997630035184 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997927489563 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207045521856 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999966058607 0.0667264976115 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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