People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
A poor decision makers can be recognized by the result of that decision. If the outcome is as intended then the decision can be called good decision and vice versa. Personally, I think about the given statement is logical but I have objection on the last parts of it. I think decision shouldn't be made on just emotional basis and leave for logic afterwards a good choice. There are some certain points I would like to discuss in this writings.
Suppose, You're in a condition that someone needs help from you about something. As you know them them very well because they're close to you, you may open the lid of your heart for helping them and later realized that by helping them, you've lost some of your cherished property/wealth and now you need help. But who'll help you now? Clearly, it was a bad decision to helping others with something that one needs too. So, driving by emotion and followed by taking decision isn't a good approach.
Sometimes, people who we care about needs help and and we must. In these case we just have to help them with our best efforts to make sure that they're okay. In these case, we shouldn't justify our decision afterwards with logic.
Decisions are things that we make in every stage of our lives. Emotion is an abstract thing or feeling that we feel for people who are close to us. Emotion is something that cannot be justified by logic. If making decisions are involved these peoples, and we get sentimental while taking decision, we may often take the wrong choice.
In many times during our life cycles we have to choose and take decisions. If we take decision based on our emotion, most often we ended up with bad decision feel bad especially when we try to find the logic afterwards. So, in my opinion, logic should be the base of our decision and then later we can find peace by finding the emotions involved in there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, well, while, i think, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58928571429 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35527072118 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.345011791 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346311057516 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121929296891 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962427380502 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206683537098 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664378332738 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.