People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Making a decision in any aspect of life is not a trivial one.it affects human life in every angle.people should consider various aspects while decision making occurs in life. while making decisions one should not consider emotionally. in my opinion, I strongly agree with the prompt that one makes decision-based on emotion and then logic base reasoning afterward, makes one decision a poor one because of two reasons.
at first, people should consider logic at the beginning of the decision making the process. Logic is the most important element of any decision making. For instance, if a company wants to make a profit, it should consider all logic-based aspects. Like product quality, employee's ability to produce certain works and many more. But if the top management consider the only manager-employee relationship, it will significantly lessen the product quality or company profit. Keep in mind that the manager-employee relationship is an emotional consideration of decision making. Personal relations with an employee or any bonding that is based on emotion significantly lessen the progress of the company.so when decision making occurs any manager should consider the logic first.
Further, If someone considers emotion in decision making first, it will deteriorate the quality of decisions. Emotion is always considering as a bond or something that hampers one's decision. For instance, a student chooses a career based on emotion can create a huge problem. Like, He or she likes cs(computer science) based on emotion. But afterward, he or she notices that he is very bad at programming. This will hamper his or her career.so, at first consideration, he should think about the logic-based aspects which constitute reality.
in conclusion, someone may argue that if someone is not considering emotion, then he or she will not satisfied in life. But, it's a reality one should consider logic first.so it's obvious from upper considerations and reasons that one must consider logic first while making decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35109717868 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0216834134 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520376175549 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9708096214 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8333333333 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7222222222 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34446383491 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12552186581 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107756169521 0.0758088955206 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219794965342 0.150359130593 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129055638828 0.0667264976115 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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