Public Figures such as actors, politicians and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy.
In 21st century, where a social media and media both are very powerful and handy tools. Actors, athletes and politicians are always want to get benefit from them. So, eventually they seeking attention from people by knowing that it will leads to give up some of their privacy.
In current social media effected time If people won’t take interest in any celebrity then he or she will be labelled as flop. If a star can’t able to create a fame or global recognition then who is going to watch their movie? If a politician does not publicize his view and work then how people know about his political agenda for upcoming election. If athletes does not create a charm around him then how he will earn advertise which helps him to earn extra money. So, In this profession advertise and selling yourselves is main demand. For that person has to publicize him well and eventually it results as some of their privacy lose. Like in current time every politician has twitter account and every hour they have to keep awake about day to day action otherwise they will trolled by media. Actors has to post about their movies and their promotional events every time which ends up revealing their location. Athletes has to reveal their training schedule and some footage of training and that might lead to revealing their secret of success. However, besides these risks, If people should not interested in their private lives then this may leads to their failed career or low fame life style. We have look at many actors’ children acting in commercial which helps them to earn more money and fame by revealing their private lives. So, by losing some of their privacy is not big fuss.
Many people idealize them as well as madly love them. All people wants to know actors beauty secret. Many people want to know secret behind grandiloquence speech of politician. Many people want to know how athletes fitness secret. However, Some of them madly love them as some draw picture of them and gifts them. In case of politician many persons joins the party of politician. Many people joins the same gym as athletes because they want to meet them and share some time with them. This seems quite annoying approaching someone without permission though celebrities take interest in their supporters which eventually leads them to earn more respect by giving some time of their private life.
However, more media coverage and more obsessed fan create a trouble by harassing family members of celebrity. As seeking attention of celebrity is not much issue as this seems giving some of private life however continue approaching family members of celebrity and asking about them is disgusting. If a person giving some of private space to you does ‘t mean we have a right of constant attention. However, Being a celebrity they have to deal with losing private life issue. We have seen example of many fans approaching celebrity outside car or coming to their home. We have seen many athletes get harassed by fan for just one pic. We have seen many media journalists seeking picture of celebrity outside airport and their home. So, if celebrity deals with this with cool mind then he will earn more fame. Which eventually helps career by giving up some of privacy.
So, As global celebrity persons have to expect people to be interested in their private lives in the result of little privacy. Because this may leads to better fame, reputation and recognition throughout glob.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'wanted'.
Suggestion: wanted
...rs, athletes and politicians are always want to get benefit from them. So, eventuall...
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Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ion from people by knowing that it will leads to give up some of their privacy. In c...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...political agenda for upcoming election. If athletes does not create a charm around...
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Line 2, column 360, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...political agenda for upcoming election. If athletes does not create a charm around...
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Line 2, column 788, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'troll'
Suggestion: troll
...t day to day action otherwise they will trolled by media. Actors has to post about thei...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some footage of training and that might lead to revealing their secret of succes...
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Line 2, column 1110, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...sides these risks, If people should not interested in their private lives then this may le...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s get harassed by fan for just one pic. We have seen many media journalists seekin...
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Message: “So , if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lebrity outside airport and their home. So, if celebrity deals with this with cool min...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cool mind then he will earn more fame. Which eventually helps career by giving up so...
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Message: “So , As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...career by giving up some of privacy. So, As global celebrity persons have to expect...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 33.0505617978 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2884.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 592.0 442.535393258 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87162162162 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40273728428 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427364864865 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 916.2 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0655621819 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8235294118 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304210140096 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780797345345 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619440419745 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175780852456 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0594202500664 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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