Scientists and other researchers should focus their research on areas that are likely to
benefit the greatest number of people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation
Science is the basis of development. The modern era has been developed with various inventions and discoveries made in past. Many of them being accidental but on greater good they are proved to be helpful for mankind. But each and every thing has two sides being good and bad. Good aspects are what we have to seek to achieve constructive profits.
Looking at the current scenario, many of the research has proved to be good and bad in various aspects. There is a famous quote need gives birth to invention which has to be understood well. in the modern age we are utilizing the luxuries which are the results of inventions made in the past, here question to be answered is are we utilizing them as our per our needs? If you look around you will get the answer and which will assert you that we are misusing them! How can this be true? Consider the example of automobiles, the vehicle which can be used to commute for minimum of four people, is not getting used to full of its capacity. Many people around you have stopped using bicycles because they have other vehicles. Here one has to understand the need and act accordingly.
Due to such misuse, we are facing any issues such as global warming, we humans have become threat to other living species as we are polluting our air, water, cutting down forests for the development which are the natural habitats of other living species. If we mankind can not be considerate for other species then we are the danger for existence of other species and to ourselves as well. Manier times you would have come across the news of oil spillage over the rivers or sea surfaces due to leakage in the ships, the glaciers in the sea are melting at higher speed, etc. Such problems needs greater attention considering the near future and its impact on ecosystem.
Considering all this, science and research should focus on the problems created due to misuse of it and we need to find the solution to fix them right. If we fail to do so then it will be difficult to survive, as you will not get clean air to breath, limited food sources as we are utilizing the agricultural land for industrialization, no clean water to drink as we have polluted most of our water reserviors with polluted water. All these aspects are linked to the greatest good of greatest number of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...various inventions and discoveries made in past. Many of them being accidental but on g...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...ention which has to be understood well. in the modern age we are utilizing the lux...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lts of inventions made in the past, here question to be answered is are we utiliz...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...can not be considerate for other species then we are the danger for existence of ...
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Line 7, column 482, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the greatest'.
Suggestion: of the greatest
...aspects are linked to the greatest good of greatest number of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, so, then, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59036144578 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48861655695 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513253012048 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5811257905 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.263157895 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8421052632 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05263157895 5.21951772744 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137652366172 0.243740707755 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428145717685 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414065220177 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820233093608 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504712192056 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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