Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Human beings are completely dependent on society as well as environment for their existence. Corporations are nothing but a group of people from our race who operate industries and drive the economy. End goal of any company is to make substantial profit. However, it is the moral duty of the companies to work for the betterment of the surroundings in which they function.
A part of the corporations wealth, if used for the welfare of the society people, can be a great help in a nation's endeavor to uplift its citizens. Many initiatives can be undertaken through Corporate Social Responsibility programs. To start with, teaching programs can be started in nearby rural areas, or the lower sections of the society. Computer courses, language sessions can be imparted to children. Frequent visits to old age homes should be organized to spend some quality time with the elder citizens of the country.
Mother nature has nourished us beyond expectations. However, modern day activities have left no stone upturned in causing irreparable harm to the environment. To compensate the atrocities inflicted on nature, various green programs should be run by the corporations. Tree plantation activities can be organized; slogans like "Save Water, Save Earth" must be advertised in public places. Emphasis should be given on recycling the waste. This will help not only in preserving the environment, but also boost the company's profit.
To sum, yes, it is of utmost importance for the corporations to make money. Without capital, factories can't function. But, in doing so, one must not forget his duty towards the society. Companies have gotten immense man power; which if utilized in a constructive way can make wonders for the society as well as environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...earby rural areas, or the lower sections of the society. Computer courses, langua...
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...es have gotten immense man power; which if utilized in a constructive way can make...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a constructive way" with adverb for "constructive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...en immense man power; which if utilized in a constructive way can make wonders for the society as wel...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'as well as', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.277286135693 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.159292035398 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0648967551622 0.0880659088768 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353982300885 0.0497285424764 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0265486725664 0.0444667217837 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11209439528 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0560471976401 0.0406280797675 138% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.06210266987 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324483775811 0.030933414821 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0884955752212 0.0997080785238 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0383480825959 0.0249443105267 154% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00884955752212 0.0148568991511 60% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1788.0 2732.02544248 65% => OK
No of words: 285.0 452.878318584 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.27368421053 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40350877193 0.366273622748 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.326315789474 0.280924506359 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.245614035088 0.200843997647 122% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.168421052632 0.132149295362 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06210266987 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.48968727796 133% => OK
Word variations: 76.7285237519 55.4138127331 138% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.380412469 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9754616491 59.4972553346 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 141.124799967 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 23.380412469 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.421052631579 0.674092028746 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 47.6315789474 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 2.01333333333 1.64882698954 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448850050804 0.391690518653 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0640756518072 0.123202303941 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.064161790266 0.077325440228 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.459488307907 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144032861509 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148961560271 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109765902154 0.0892212321368 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313085595009 0.385218514788 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0572395469344 0.0692045440612 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30755582573 0.275328986314 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745639592782 0.0653680567796 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.