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Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility
of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting
your position, you should address both of the views presented.

n order to survive, corporations must make money. Successful corporations try and
make as much money as possible. Yet this incentive to make money does not mean
that a corporation can be a detriment to the society in which it operates. Corporations
have a duty and a responsability to ensure the well being of the society in which they
are a part.
Contributing to the well being of a society is actually benefical to a corporation
in many cases. One of these is making sure that workers are well taken care of.
Absenteeism and neglect while on duty are a big problem for corporations, as is
attracting the best workers, who hopefully will lower the risks caused by absenteeism
and neglect. One way that corporations can attract these workers is by offering them
generous benefits. If, for example, an employer includes with employment a good
health care plan, they will be able to attract better workers than one that does not, and
that will aid the corporation greatly. Health care plans provided by employers mean
that these people have at their disposal health coverage, which means that they have
the care they need if they get sick. This also might encourage preventive care,
something that has been shown to reduce the cost and risk of developing other major
ailments.
Another area where corporations providing support for themselves and society is
in the creation of human capital. Globalization and increased education means that
employers need a better educated workforce more than ever. One way that employers
can contribute to this is by sponsoring worker training programs, or paying for their
employees to return to school. This creates a more educated workforce for employers,
as well as may increase the loyalty of employees to an employer. An employee who
received an education sponsored by an employer may be thankful for receiving that
education, and may work harder for that employer. This creates a benefit for employers
and employees.
The main reason that corporations have a duty to contribute to the well being of
society is that they are a part of the society. Even though they have an economic desire
to make a profit, corporations also should think long term about actions they take
which could hurt their company. A good example of this is BP, after the recent oil spill
in the gulf. Their desire to make a profit meant that they did not keep up on all of their
safety regulations and standards, and the result of the then faulty equipment caused a
massive spill. This cost them huge amounts of money to clean up, as well as the fines
they had to pay for causing this. The biggest loss for BP however is that there brand
name will be associated in the US and abroad as the company that caused this giant oil
spill. As the spill was happening, many people boycotted the company, resulting in lost
potential revenue. They may realize that as they lose business to people upset by the
spill, that making sure a spill didn’t happen in the first place was cheaper.
Another reason corporations have to ensure the well-being of a society is that by
makign a society better off, a company may have more consumers. This is especially
true for corporations that sell goods for middle and upper class consumers. If a
corporation tries to bring people up and increase the overall economic well being of
society, they may find that more and more people have to ability to afford their goods.
This could generate huge new profits for this corporation, since their pool of potential
consumers has gone up considerably. Concentrating on the long term here means that
corporations can increase their pool of potential consumers.
By denying responsabilty to a society, a corporation is only looking at the possible
short term profits, not the potential long term ones. While in the short term it may work
for a corporation to ignore their societal responsability, it is advantageous in the long
term for the entire corporation to make sure society is getting better. The potential for
new markets, products, production processes and other beneficial factors that come
from promoting well being is quite large. This is something that corportions should be
ready and willing to take advantage of, and something that society should hold them
accountable for.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: N
n order to survive, corporations must mak...
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Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ust make money. Successful corporations try and make as much money as possible. Yet th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, while, for example, as well as, in many cases, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 34.0 19.5258426966 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 33.0 11.3162921348 292% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 72.0 33.0505617978 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 58.6224719101 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3651.0 2235.4752809 163% => OK
No of words: 725.0 442.535393258 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03586206897 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18900992827 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75460051895 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 215.323595506 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431724137931 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1098.0 704.065955056 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.2370786517 168% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9682685214 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.382352941 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3235294118 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91176470588 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 50.0 4.97078651685 1006% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 28.0 10.2758426966 272% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239831463159 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723304627042 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697093513071 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621208819937 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625901314251 0.0667264976115 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 144.0 100.480337079 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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