Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Regarding politics, it seems like there is no definitive right answer on what is the most optimal course of action. Some people assert that government officials must adhere to the will of the nation's people, whereas others emphasize that officials should make their own judgments when making decisions. I agree with the latter opinion because managing a country is not only about listening its people, but maintaing a good relationship with other countries and setting out long-term plans for improving the nation's welfare.
Admittedly, addressing the needs of the people the government serves is a vital aspect of politics. After all, most politicians and formal officials are elected by the people based on how much their agendas meet the desires of its people. The government then can readily maintain peace and order when it adheres to the voices raised by its constituents. If the will of the people are not addressed, it could lead to political unrest and people are likely to engage in protests. For example, the United States has fought with the LGBT community for a long time on the legalization of gay marriage. Even though the voice of the homosexual community became stronger, the government was hesitant on approving the law, which led many people to walk the streets and formally request their rights. It finally induced many states to approve the law, and local governments are being lauded for their actions. They have raised much more support from their local residents, and many people have expressed more satisfaction with the government.
However, the government's goal is not only to maintain peace within the country, but also to maintain peace with other formidable countries as well. In today's world, a nation cannot survive on its own, as it has become necessary to trade goods with other countries as well as form alliances to solve global issues. The reason a select number of politicians and government officials exist is because they are the ones most knowledgeable about these issues with more experience. They know what is the most prudent course of action in terms of the fate of the country as a whole. For example, Korea and Japan has a long tradition of animosity between each other because Korea was part of the Japanese colony for a few decades in the early 1900s. Most of the Koreans have underlying hostility towards the Japanese people, but the government does not bring these emotions under the limelight when meeting with the Japanese authorities. It is important that the government remain calm and act rationally in order to maintain peace in the Southeast Asia region. If Korea engages in some sort of dispute with Japan, it would disrupt the order in the whole dynamic of the relationship with other countries as well, including China and North Korea.
Additionally, the government officials are the ones who can look at the bigger picture. The country needs to think about its improvement in the next 50, 100 years. The people are mostly focused on their own well-being and how the government is supporting them to maintain a well-to-do lifestyle. However, the government needs to look at the forest and not the trees, because it is crucial for the country to retain sustainable development in order to compete with other countries. For example, in Korea in the 1970's, the president set out a 5-year economic development plan. The country encouraged foreign investments and provided subsidies for prospective companies so that the country will drastically improve its economic status. Some people were doubtful of the idea because it didn't really help the citizens as a whole, but today, Korea boasts a healthy economy.
In conclusion, even though government officials are elected to serve the needs of its people, it is more important to make their own judgments. The country needs to maintain peace inwards, but also with other countries and set plans for the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...n with the government. However, the governments goal is not only to maintain peace with...
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Line 7, column 783, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...le were doubtful of the idea because it didnt really help the citizens as a whole, bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, really, regarding, so, then, well, whereas, after all, as for, for example, in conclusion, sort of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 58.6224719101 147% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3279.0 2235.4752809 147% => OK
No of words: 649.0 442.535393258 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05238828968 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04732388556 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65113307474 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 303.0 215.323595506 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46687211094 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1009.8 704.065955056 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2450559612 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.107142857 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1785714286 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32142857143 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26233881088 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07391835289 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664010013604 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166393066092 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506388761458 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 151.0 100.480337079 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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