Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
A leader is a man who guides the people in the right direction. To build and develop a nation strongly, the role of a leader is necessary. To achieve this the leader should have a circumspect, mindful and good political acumen. The leader should be a political savvy and should follow the principles and rules to lead the nation to the success. Considering all the above facts, a political leader must be committed to the rules and objectives to guide the nation to reach goal.
There are many exemplar leaders which can be considered. Consider the example of the great leader of India, the Gandhi. Gandhi is a powerful political leader.He united India, with harmony, and brought freedom to the country from the British hegemony. He followed his principles, abided his rules and commitment to help nation to unencumbered.With his good conviction, which based his political principles and objectives the success attained fruition.
Although the main stress should be laid on the principles and objectives, listening to the public words is also one of the quality of a leader.True leader should be one among the team.Leader although is well equipped with the principled thoughts, should sometimes listen to the ideas of the public opinion, scrutinize them and then inculcate them in the execution of a gambit.But at the same time, he should prescient in incorporating the opinions of the public. The public may not be a well informed in politics, and hence there may be likely that sometimes their opinion will lack the big picture.
Thus, in a nutshell, a political leader should be committed to the objectives and principles. More stress must be laid on the discrete intuitions. Then only the success can be achieved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, so, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 286.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03846153846 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8768405501 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493006993007 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.377083672 60.3974514979 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245818446166 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958654926433 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362539636847 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155973531649 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033001273465 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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