Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
To become an effective leader, leader should not submit to public's will because a leader is well-informed to make decision and sometimes people can make outrageously unjust demands.
Leaders are well equipped with information to take a decision and can undesrstand the bigger picture. People, on the other hand, are myopic and look for the ways to instantly banish their thought provoking stimulus. For example, a few terrorists fostered near the Indo-Pak border ambushed a military camp at the Uri, India. The instant reaction and stand of people on this issue was to attack Pakistan. There are many instances when Indian people react this way, ignoring the fact that both countires are nuclear power and if war happens, it would lead to carnage on both sides, India and Pakistan. Indian leadership instead chose to carry out clandestine surgical strike and they succesfully did it. By doing so, leaders have dettered the terrorists near border from attacking, in addition to, mollifying angry people.
Had the leaders yielded to public demand of attacking Pakistan under the pretext that they sponsor those terrorist, it would have cost too much to India.
Sometimes people can make quixotic demannds thinking that their demands have no dire consequences.For instance, lately, a few groups in India belonging to particular creed have been staging protest to increase the reservation they get in job and education. Reservation is the provision through which particular number of seats in any field- education or job- are allocated to people belonging to certain group. Indian constitution have amended that there can never be more than a total of 50% reservation for all the backward people. But now some people were demanding to increase reservation from 50% to 60%, which I think is ridiculuos.
However, sometimes people can really be in need of leaders help and demand aid for very basic things. In such cases, leader should heed to public opinion and help them out to work efficiently.
In conclusion, Leaders should not blindly submit to public demand because they are well-informed to make decision and people can deman unrealistic things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, really, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20461095101 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71312141825 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590778097983 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.396861125 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.21951772744 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185788086105 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063184566107 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492574402209 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114220097437 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501577583749 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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