Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Any democratic country ensures freedom to its citizens and permits them to elect representatives who are obliged to ensure a better life for their supporters. Although, these elected leaders must take into account public opinions to some extent, it would be an imprudent decision to yield completely to the people at the cost of the leader's moral principles. Every politician is characterised by his principles and his stand in the quotidian issues of the country and hence, the leader must remain loyal to his principles.
An ordinary human often has a myopic view of the situations around him and is predisposed to be biased in situations that concern him. In such cases, he often fails to fathom the issue and take a decision which accounts for the views and well-being of each individual affected by that decision. This is precisely why we require a leader - he represents the society as a whole.
Moreover, leaders are erudite and have a deeper knowledge of the situation compared to a common man. They are in touch with various other politicians who share similar mores. They regularly discuss the matters at hand and have a holistic view of the issues faced. They could study, together, the various paradigms implemeted in different countries to solve the existing issue and can implement similar strategies which agree with their principles.
Any good leader is distinguished from the corrupt and decietful politicians by his set of principles. He is elected by the people who admire his morals and are convinced that he would act in accordance with his mores and bring about positive changes in the nation.
Hence, it is implied that a leader should not be fickle and have strong morals along which he works. He must eradicate problems and find solutions for national issues which agree with his well defined set of principles.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve a holistic view of the issues faced. They could study, together, the various para...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ith his well defined set of principles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74114245338 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557003257329 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2090811014 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167266209695 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584898325532 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622245715352 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917415550596 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654596018387 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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