Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Media influences our perception of the world beyond our tiny space to a great extent. Newspapers, news channels and social media are our pathway to connect to the outside world. They bring to us news amd stories from all corners of the world. Due to the major role played by the media in our lives, the responsibility of dispering valid information rests on their shoulders. However, in recent times, it is often noticed that media brings to us several false information and denigrates the emminent citizens of the nation.
The increasing competition among different newspapers and new channels has proven detrimental to the society. In order to gain popularity, these journalists and reporters are predisposed to amplifying the smallest bit of anomalous behaviour of any celebrity they can catch their hands upon. They are quick to point out any mistake or tactless behaviour of a noted personality in public and denigrate them. Also, news channels regularly conduct debates in which many noteworthy people are condemned and their flaws exposed.
In addition, social media plays a crucial role in influencing people of all age groups, especially the young and immature section of our society. Social media serves as a great platform for spreading canards regarding celebrities and prejudices against certain members of the society. The internet very often potrays false facts pertaining to the people and inveigles wrong notions in the minds of the youngsters.
Albeit few emminent people might argue that media offers a discerning and unbiased view of the world around us to the citizens, it indubitably has a penchant for disseminating false and acrimonious views among the society in order to gain popularity over fellow competitors.
In summary, media plays an important role is shaping the views and notions people have of the society and tends to debase people more often that praising them for their deeds. Hence, in such situation, it is impossible for any member of the society to be potrayed as a hero.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, regarding, so, in addition, in summary, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15853658537 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78312749111 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6675799001 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112788854931 0.243740707755 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386197562324 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362254945844 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632663800794 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298503978228 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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