Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives
As an educator, this topic is quite controversial to me.This topic is also aired in debatable show of Fox News channel. In this particular show Major scholars are against the person who believes that political leader must take the public opinion. Now one may ask why Major scholars do not assert the recommendations of the above person?. There are many reason but most notbaly that the level of political leader is depedendent upon his/her principles and objectives. If the people admires their principles and objectives then such leader will be selected as Member of legislature.Thus, i also disgree with recommendation of people who thinks that leader should abandon the priciples.
Firstly, i would like to point out that there are two types of people, one who gives suggestion for the development of the country where as others gives the suggestion for their own development.for more clarification, let us look at the example of Triple talak bill. as per this bill, a muslim man will not be allowed to divorce her wife by saying talak, talak, talak( which means divorce,divorce, divorce). If law minister takes the opinion from muslim board then such bill will not be able come in parliament.Thus, the foremost quality of the political leader is abililty to remain consistent.
Secondly, Political leader should creates a balance in taking the public opinion and remaining consistent to his/her principles.for more clearance, let us look at the example of Direct tax bill( Income tax) Political leader should ,before enforcing the bill into Act, takes the opinion of business leaders as well as service man/women, however it doesnot mean that leader makes the amendment according to their opinion. As some business leader may say to reduce the income tax rate or some may say to ease the tax system.Hence, this clearly shows that the opinion is self oriented and not country's development orriented.
In consluion,although abandon his/her principles is not totally wrong. equality is one of obvious resason, however, publice opinion is totally self oriented. As per Mahatama Gandhi, " Difference between leader and the leader is depends upon his/her principles,vision and mission."
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1855.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2849002849 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07496244382 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552706552707 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.2608317682 60.3974514979 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.692307692 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305765841112 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100333799586 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071394487057 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170248914054 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549161027478 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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