Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether science has resolved the mysterious understanding of the world or it enhances the confusion for better understanding of the world. Indisputably, there are numerous mysterious which kept unrevealed by science. Neverthless, science has resolved many of the complex problems which people were facing previously. For intance, the discovery of calculator makes us free from complex calculations which earlier people were facing. Thus, many secret mysteries of the world has been uncovered by sciene and makes the world a heaven for people.
First of all, we can't imagine the world without smartphones, laptops, internet, electricity and many more technologies which were discovered by science. Our daily life is fully dependent on these gadgets and it makes our life easier and comfortable. For instance, the industrilization is only possible after the vital discovery of wheel. Furthermore, Steve Jobs have created first graphical user interface computer which he called Apple computer, due to which we video chat and do a lot of stuff on computer. There are numerous discoveries which have made the world better around us. Therefore, discoveries in science and technology has uncovered many of the crucial aspects which provide ease of life for us.
Furthermore, there are many discoveries which is still uncovered by science and technology. For instance, the idea of time machine has been though from many generations but still the mystery is a secret. Moreover, Science is still reasearching whether life can be possible in some other planets or not. These mysterious discoveries are still from decades which makes the world more complex then we think. Apart from these, there are wide range of mysteries which are still an enigma and scientists are still in progress for their discovery. Therefore, although science has unconvered many of the secrets, some things are still mysterious which makes the world more complex then we assume.
In conclusion, from the dawn of human history, science has uncovered many of the secrets which have puzzled humans for centuries. The discovery of fire was the starting point and aftewards many inventions have done by science from the ancient discovery of wheel to the discovery of latest technology like artificial intelligence which have provide ease to life. However, there are still some answers which were complex to be researched by science but many discoveries of science could change the life of humans drastically and makes their world a better place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... heaven for people. First of all, we cant imagine the world without smartphones, ...
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Line 5, column 391, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ades which makes the world more complex then we think. Apart from these, there are w...
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Line 5, column 674, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ious which makes the world more complex then we assume. In conclusion, from the d...
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Line 7, column 280, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...ent discovery of wheel to the discovery of latest technology like artificial intelligence...
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Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...like artificial intelligence which have provide ease to life. However, there are still ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31773399015 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8342048916 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458128078818 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8273534903 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.95 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281371822432 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107709255962 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848513484804 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193732814474 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035757714115 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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